Lets get Lyrical Aryeh (Aryeh Wa...

look, are-ya(Aryeh) finished? 'cause your bars read like a rough draft with a deadline extension

you opened with gravity physics, thats a motivational convention

threw newtons third law at me like its a weapon, thats a tension

between wanting to sound deep and the shallow end of your comprehension

i dont need a warning label, you need a rap intervention

you spelled out fire and somehow still got extinguished

every letter an adjective, zero substance, the distinction

between acronym bars and actual craft is a distinction

that your whole approach to lyricism seems to've relinquished

fuck the pire he is expired, the hyphen theres distinguished

alliterations stacked, "morons with minimal mastery" you proud of that?

fuck a tongue twister for third graders dressed in a combat hat

thesaurus open, synonym surfing, watching the synonyms clap

while the meaning walked out the room and never looked back

you mistook vocabulary density for bars and thats a fatal fact

you took five L's in one clause, you wrapped the joke for me

you handed me the ammunition, loaded it, and stood there hopefully

the alliteration fetish is showing, homie thats a cope supremely

aryeh out here writing like he needs the literary crowd to cosign, mostly

real emcees make language bend, not just stack letters decoratively

the penitentiary thats with entry level wit

2006 called every mixtape rapper on datpiff already submitted it

givin' me a chemistry lesson nobody requested, admit it

you reached so hard for literary that the whole verse dislocated, you split it

between trying to sound smart and actually being smart, you missed both, acquit it

balls up, take a L James, fuck that punchline in twenty twenty six, thats a vintage problem

the tall tale metaphor watched that bar wobble, then bottom

your not ballin', your stalling with references that belong in the autumn

of a decade ago, recycling cold punchlines like you forgot 'em

im too busy writing futures while your carbon dating your own rhyme column

you have some slogan tee energy, thats a hot topic verse

you described your life as a horror movie, then gave us the pg13 cut, even worse

i dont peek at scenes, i write the script, direct it, lift the curse

you said evolve like a pokemon arc but stayed at level one, rehearse

real evolution leaves the chrysalis but you still in the egg, disperse

your general consensus, meaning you polled yourself, thats circular

your the metaphor man who threw a metaphor and hit the perpendicular

the matador thing? you missed, and the bull didnt even look, spectacular

failure, aryeh out here charging windmills, vernacular

without the craft to back it up is just vocabulary thats vehicular

lets go with the double just one more time

youve recycled that same construct twice in one verse bradar thats a paradigm

of someone who found one trick and leaned on it like a paradigm

is infinite, it isnt, the well ran dry about the second climb

im not writing punchlines, im rewriting your whole sense of the sublime

Okay let's switch it up then aryeh

aryehs dead on arrival and I mean the rap and the arrival, two meanings, one verdict

the bars were DOA before the page even heard it dead on arrival, the surface

you surface to surface, missile and shallow, both readings confirmed it

you served it up cold and you served time with it, the court and the kitchen, deserved it

im working the double shift, double meaning and double the wordsmith, your worth split

are ya serious or area 'cause both readings say vacant possession

an area with no landmarks, and a question thats begging a question

the area code you rep is unlisted, both the hood and the session

your listing like a ship and like bullet points, tilting and confession

both meanings of drift apply your lost at sea and lost the lesson

let me teach you darwinian like I caught both signals

your still a magikarp splashing, the move and the verb, two decimals

of failure stacked, splash does nothing in battle, check the reciprocals

the game and real life both confirm it, your outputs residual

leftover bars, residue and remainder, the math and the visual

every bar you drop is behind bars, incarcerated and below standard

the cell your in, prison and biology, both small, both commander

of nothing, your basic, pH zero and personality, candor

demands I say it plain, elementary the grade and the conan doyle answer

your elementary, both beginner and baker street your the bystander

aryeh are yeh signed your name to these bars, autograph and death warrant, cosigned your ending

the will you lack, determination and the document, both pending

you pending, unresolved and hanging overhead, both readings are trending

toward the same conclusion, your suspended, school and midair, descending

every fall you take, the season and the stumble, both unending

your delivery is off, the package and the punchline, both returned to sender

the hook you wrote caught nothing, fishing and the song structure, slender

thread of relevance, thread like the sewing and the argument, surrender

your just fraying unraveling and losing the gender

of your bars, meaning measures, musics gone, just measures of blunder

your fired guess PIRE spelled it and the job status confirmed it, two layered

the draft you wrote you got first attempt and military both got you wayward

you misdirected and rebellious the readings got you papered

with a failing grade guess the meanings capered

away from quality, caper like the crime and the skip, you capered

your verse got worse, homophone collision, phonetic and factual

the sentence you structured, grammatical and pena the two are impractical

long and unjust, the run on applies to both the bar and the contractual

agreement you made with rap when you signed up, breach, legal and actual

shoreline you cant reach, breach of contract and the wave, both impactful to nobody

guess bros a footnote with the note at the foot

of a page nobodys reading, comprehension and the location you took

your stand, musical and confrontational, both shook

the stand collapsed, furniture positions shift by one look

from jonah, look out, overlook