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Lets get Lyrical Aryeh (Aryeh Warning Shots)
- look, are ya(Aryeh) finished? 'cause your bars read like a rough draft with a deadline extension
- you opened with gravity physics, thats a motivational convention
- threw newtons third law at me like its a weapon, thats a tension
- between wanting to sound deep and the shallow end of your comprehension
- i dont need a warning label, you need a rap intervention
- you spelled out fire and somehow still got extinguished
- every letter an adjective, zero substance, the distinction
- between acronym bars and actual craft is a distinction
- that your whole approach to lyricism seems to've relinquished
- fuck the pire he is expired, the hyphen theres distinguished
- alliterations stacked, "morons with minimal mastery" you proud of that?
- fuck a tongue twister for third graders dressed in a combat hat
- thesaurus open, synonym surfing, watching the synonyms clap
- while the meaning walked out the room and never looked back
- you mistook vocabulary density for bars and thats a fatal fact
- you took five L's in one clause, you wrapped the joke for me
- you handed me the ammunition, loaded it, and stood there hopefully
- the alliteration fetish is showing, homie thats a cope supremely
- aryeh out here writing like he needs the literary crowd to cosign, mostly
- real emcees make language bend, not just stack letters decoratively
- the penitentiary thats with entry level wit
- 2006 called every mixtape rapper on datpiff already submitted it
- givin' me a chemistry lesson nobody requested, admit it
- you reached so hard for literary that the whole verse dislocated, you split it
- between trying to sound smart and actually being smart, you missed both, acquit it
- balls up, take a L James, fuck that punchline in twenty twenty six, thats a vintage problem
- the tall tale metaphor watched that bar wobble, then bottom
- your not ballin', your stalling with references that belong in the autumn
- of a decade ago, recycling cold punchlines like you forgot 'em
- im too busy writing futures while your carbon dating your own rhyme column
- you have some slogan tee energy, thats a hot topic verse
- you described your life as a horror movie, then gave us the pg13 cut, even worse
- i dont peek at scenes, i write the script, direct it, lift the curse
- you said evolve like a pokemon arc but stayed at level one, rehearse
- real evolution leaves the chrysalis but you still in the egg, disperse
- your general consensus, meaning you polled yourself, thats circular
- your the metaphor man who threw a metaphor and hit the perpendicular
- the matador thing? you missed, and the bull didnt even look, spectacular
- failure, aryeh out here charging windmills, vernacular
- without the craft to back it up is just vocabulary thats vehicular
- lets go with the double just one more time
- youve recycled that same construct twice in one verse bradar thats a paradigm
- of someone who found one trick and leaned on it like a paradigm
- is infinite, it isnt, the well ran dry about the second climb
- im not writing punchlines, im rewriting your whole sense of the sublime
- Okay let's switch it up then aryeh
- aryehs dead on arrival and I mean the rap and the arrival, two meanings, one verdict
- the bars were DOA before the page even heard it dead on arrival, the surface
- you surface to surface, missile and shallow, both readings confirmed it
- you served it up cold and you served time with it, the court and the kitchen, deserved it
- im working the double shift, double meaning and double the wordsmith, your worth split
- are ya serious or area 'cause both readings say vacant possession
- an area with no landmarks, and a question thats begging a question
- the area code you rep is unlisted, both the hood and the session
- your listing like a ship and like bullet points, tilting and confession
- both meanings of drift apply your lost at sea and lost the lesson
- let me teach you darwinian like I caught both signals
- your still a magikarp splashing, the move and the verb, two decimals
- of failure stacked, splash does nothing in battle, check the reciprocals
- the game and real life both confirm it, your outputs residual
- leftover bars, residue and remainder, the math and the visual
- every bar you drop is behind bars, incarcerated and below standard
- the cell your in, prison and biology, both small, both commander
- of nothing, your basic, pH zero and personality, candor
- demands I say it plain, elementary the grade and the conan doyle answer
- your elementary, both beginner and baker street your the bystander
- aryeh are yeh signed your name to these bars, autograph and death warrant, cosigned your ending
- the will you lack, determination and the document, both pending
- you pending, unresolved and hanging overhead, both readings are trending
- toward the same conclusion, your suspended, school and midair, descending
- every fall you take, the season and the stumble, both unending
- your delivery is off, the package and the punchline, both returned to sender
- the hook you wrote caught nothing, fishing and the song structure, slender
- thread of relevance, thread like the sewing and the argument, surrender
- your just fraying unraveling and losing the gender
- of your bars, meaning measures, musics gone, just measures of blunder
- your fired guess PIRE spelled it and the job status confirmed it, two layered
- the draft you wrote you got first attempt and military both got you wayward
- you misdirected and rebellious the readings got you papered
- with a failing grade guess the meanings capered
- away from quality, caper like the crime and the skip, you capered
- your verse got worse, homophone collision, phonetic and factual
- the sentence you structured, grammatical and pena the two are impractical
- long and unjust, the run on applies to both the bar and the contractual
- agreement you made with rap when you signed up, breach, legal and actual
- shoreline you cant reach, breach of contract and the wave, both impactful to nobody
- guess bros a footnote with the note at the foot
- of a page nobodys reading, comprehension and the location you took
- your stand, musical and confrontational, both shook
- the stand collapsed, furniture positions shift by one look
- from jonah, look out, overlook
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