Loud ≠ Legendary (Diss to the 3 ...

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I had another diss to them and posted it on my MM but I accidentally posted the rap where I did my work out on so ignore that. Can't believe these newbies are dissing XF already. Wild, huh? Weak ass rhymes that sound like a children's poem. Well, they brought it upon themselves. Enjoy the diss! <3

[Jonahh]
Jonahh, three days in and already screaming like you built your name from the ground
But that ain’t a rise to power, that’s a rookie making noise just to be heard in the crowd
 
You stretched that Santa scheme way too far, it snapped before it could even connect
Then forced in Atlanta just to rhyme, like you didn’t trust your own setup to land correct
 
Your punches feel rushed, like you wrote them quick just to keep up with the pace
But fast doesn’t equal fire, it just leaves more weak spots for me to trace
 
You tried to come loud with aggression, but there’s no precision behind what you write
So every bar you throw out wild just ends up missing the fight
 
[PK13]
PK13, you typed a whole breakdown tryna act like the smartest one in the room
But one rhyme sound thirty times straight just proves your range hit a ceiling too soon
 
“-tion, -tion, -tion,” you circled one sound and called that complexity and control
But real lyricism switches lanes, you stayed parked and just spun your wheels in a hole
 
You kept saying Gen X name like you needed it just to keep your diss alive
Whole track built off someone else’s presence, that’s not dominance, that’s you trying to survive
 
You analyzed everything but yourself, that’s the flaw in your whole approach
You wrote essays on the squad while your own structure stayed out of reach to coach
 
[WALKEMDOWN995LESTER]
Lester, all that weapon talk don’t hit when your pen can’t even aim a clean line
You listing guns like it’s inventory, but your bars still misfire every time
 
You went full rage mode ‘cause the writing couldn’t carry the weight of your verse
So you turned up the volume instead of fixing the lines that made it worse
 
You said you’d “keep going,” but you showed everything in that first loud wave
Threats, no structure, no punches that land, nothing that actually stays
 
You tried shock value ‘cause your rhyme value wasn’t enough to compete on the page
But anger ain’t skill, it just exposes the gaps you couldn’t engage
 
[All 3]
Three new names, one loud push, all noise, no real foundation set
You came for attention, not respect, and that’s exactly what you get
 
We don’t gotta threaten, we just write and let the crowd decide who’s next
And every time you drop our names, you just add another win to X Factor’s checks

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