Palimpsest 2.0
• Written by wasp
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/// Hook \\\
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Wrote it in pencil 'fore the thought was even placed
the graphite ghost persists through every page thats been erased
Every hole they dug became the stage theyd consecrate
read the residue. the interest accrues with weight
/// Verse 1 \\\
The craftsman kept the last good chisel in a tin
the edge honed sharp enough to split a quip and grin
from teeth too precise to begin on anything less genuine
than what the stone concealed so half his discipline
looked barren to the critics who conflate discipline
dissolving with the drought, unaware the discipline
of marble is its own a surface kin
to silence one that gives itself to genuine
patience only orion logic glancing in
the wrong half of the dark, youll find nothing therein
but tilt the patient neck and the myth begins again
the belt, the sword, the hunter permanent within
the winter sky, not given, but attended in
the way that medicine attends, though genuine
attendance isnt visible, arts discipline
dressed as absence, so the work looked thin
until the marble opened like a discipline
of love expressing finally what love had kept within
and what he left looks like the stone chose discipline
but really its just love that wore its skin
/// Pre-Hook \\\
The moon dont argue with the tide
it pulls. the coast decides.
Most laws of nature dont require compliance.
The ones that break become the finest science.
/// Hook \\\
Wrote it in pencil 'fore the thought was even placed
the graphite ghost persists through every page thats been erased
Every hole they dug became the stage theyd consecrate
read the residue. the interest accrues with weight
/// Verse 2 \\\
The photograph lies honest by the frame of what it claimed
the flash pressed out the afternoon, the shadow went unnamed
the absence went unfiled and the committee then acclaimed
the image as the record, signed and certified, inflamed
with certainty whatever shadow filled the frame
was reclassified as background and the background got reclaimed
as context but the context was the wound that bled and maimed
the particulars from record still the record stood, remained
optics over organs, every decade, same
the wright brothers bore the shame of dreamers who were tamed
by gravity until the gravity was named
in lift coefficient icarus got framed
by ovid as the kid who overreached but blamed
the wrong party, daedalus, who gamed
the narrative built the maze stayed on earth, proclaimed
himself the craftsman shipped a wing with no disclaimed
liability inside no caution named
or clause explained he silence in the blueprint maimed
the son the aegean did the rest and bore his name
a body of water with a body to the name
/// Bridge \\\
Theres a word for a page thats been written
scraped clean, and written again
the ghost of the first hand bleeds through
and warps what the second hand says
call it history. call it inheritance.
call it what the living have claimed
from the residue of those before them
who convinced them it was theirs to name
/// Verse 3 \\\
Finished off the last of what was stored inside the fridge
cold ambition, three day old resolve across the edge
of every conversation where he'd promised to abridge
the monologue but thought condensed along the ledge
to something intricate as escher logic at the wedge
between impossible and built the staircase hedged
in on itself ascending nowhere and the privilege
of that was the point some architecture is the bridge
between two places that dont actually share a ridge
he argued with the calendar the way youd dredge
a silt thick river just to see what laid embedded
at the bottom of the february pledge
he lit the resolution with a match, the shredded
promise pressed like flowers in the margin decorative, embedded
evidence of april when you find it he was headed
nowhere fast, which is to say exactly where hed threaded
every road back to the room, the pen, the well worn bedded
groove of the familiar where the most is said in
what gets left the graphite on the page beneath the page
the first draft of a self before the self gets staged
before the flash erases what the afternoon had aged
to something honest this is it the residue of rage
distilled to patience, patience to the work, the work to age
the age to archive, archive to the palimpsest of page
/// Outro, Hook Variation \\\
So here it stands the palimpsest of all displaced
original and borrowed, thoroughly worn and traced
the ghost of every draft still bleeding through the face
Find him in the friction where the graphite meets the page
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wasp
Member since October 18 2023