BUILDING BLUEPRINT
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Palimpsest 2.0
- ///Hook \\\
- 0:44
- [.](Loop if beat ends.)
- Wrote it in pencil 'fore the thought was even placed
- the graphite ghost persists through every page thats been erased
- Every hole they dug became the stage theyd consecrate
- read the residue. the interest accrues with weight
- ///Verse 1 \\\
- The craftsman kept the last good chisel in a tin
- the edge honed sharp enough to split a quip and grin
- from teeth too precise to begin on anything less genuine
- than what the stone concealed so half his discipline
- looked barren to the critics who conflate discipline
- dissolving with the drought, unaware the discipline
- of marble is its own a surface kin
- to silence one that gives itself to genuine
- patience only orion logic glancing in
- the wrong half of the dark, youll find nothing therein
- but tilt the patient neck and the myth begins again
- the belt, the sword, the hunter permanent within
- the winter sky, not given, but attended in
- the way that medicine attends, though genuine
- attendance isnt visible, arts discipline
- dressed as absence, so the work looked thin
- until the marble opened like a discipline
- of love expressing finally what love had kept within
- and what he left looks like the stone chose discipline
- but really its just love that wore its skin
- ///Pre Hook \\\
- The moon dont argue with the tide
- it pulls. the coast decides.
- Most laws of nature dont require compliance.
- The ones that break become the finest science.
- ///Hook \\\
- Wrote it in pencil 'fore the thought was even placed
- the graphite ghost persists through every page thats been erased
- Every hole they dug became the stage theyd consecrate
- read the residue. the interest accrues with weight
- ///Verse 2 \\\
- The photograph lies honest by the frame of what it claimed
- the flash pressed out the afternoon, the shadow went unnamed
- the absence went unfiled and the committee then acclaimed
- the image as the record, signed and certified, inflamed
- with certainty whatever shadow filled the frame
- was reclassified as background and the background got reclaimed
- as context but the context was the wound that bled and maimed
- the particulars from record still the record stood, remained
- optics over organs, every decade, same
- the wright brothers bore the shame of dreamers who were tamed
- by gravity until the gravity was named
- in lift coefficient icarus got framed
- by ovid as the kid who overreached but blamed
- the wrong party, daedalus, who gamed
- the narrative built the maze stayed on earth, proclaimed
- himself the craftsman shipped a wing with no disclaimed
- liability inside no caution named
- or clause explained he silence in the blueprint maimed
- the son the aegean did the rest and bore his name
- a body of water with a body to the name
- ///Bridge \\\
- Theres a word for a page thats been written
- scraped clean, and written again
- the ghost of the first hand bleeds through
- and warps what the second hand says
- call it history. call it inheritance.
- call it what the living have claimed
- from the residue of those before them
- who convinced them it was theirs to name
- ///Verse 3 \\\
- Finished off the last of what was stored inside the fridge
- cold ambition, three day old resolve across the edge
- of every conversation where he'd promised to abridge
- the monologue but thought condensed along the ledge
- to something intricate as escher logic at the wedge
- between impossible and built the staircase hedged
- in on itself ascending nowhere and the privilege
- of that was the point some architecture is the bridge
- between two places that dont actually share a ridge
- he argued with the calendar the way youd dredge
- a silt thick river just to see what laid embedded
- at the bottom of the february pledge
- he lit the resolution with a match, the shredded
- promise pressed like flowers in the margin decorative, embedded
- evidence of april when you find it he was headed
- nowhere fast, which is to say exactly where hed threaded
- every road back to the room, the pen, the well worn bedded
- groove of the familiar where the most is said in
- what gets left the graphite on the page beneath the page
- the first draft of a self before the self gets staged
- before the flash erases what the afternoon had aged
- to something honest this is it the residue of rage
- distilled to patience, patience to the work, the work to age
- the age to archive, archive to the palimpsest of page
- ///Outro, Hook Variation \\\
- So here it stands the palimpsest of all displaced
- original and borrowed, thoroughly worn and traced
- the ghost of every draft still bleeding through the face
- Find him in the friction where the graphite meets the page
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