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Yo — I felt a fight approachin’, tension closin’ in its orbit,
but kids a joke — I’m just exposin’ him, let UNO know the truth:
your writin’s so unfocused it’s atrocious, hopeless,
generic to the bone like every note was ghost‑script.
 
Some past battles? Yeah, they were close, I’ll own it —
but this one ends with your body thrown in a hole where the stone is.
What’s a “titan” to a “joke,” when the moment gets explosive?
I got your coffin measured — stand beside it,
watch you choke while this writer gets corroded.
 
You rhyme like you ain’t ever trained phonics,
no logic, stray topics, straight comic —
your lines wander like the page’s breakin’ from the weight on it.
Another “special” gettin’ killed —
007 still — I aim proper, lift your spirit, take the shot,
soul exit — no problem.
I’m cold‑hearted — froze solid,
ancient snow fallin’ — a whole blizzard in my bones talkin’.
 
And people still duck my pad to this day — ironic —
’cause you’re the one with the low ceiling
claimin’ you’re a “vet,” ranked with the best,
till you stepped in the ring with The Great Nate
and watched your claim collapse under stress.
 
It was great for a sec —
then you turned “next lame,” bent outta shape, a real pain in the neck,
brain is a wreck, deranged, distressed —
hallucinatin’ unchecked ’til the meds kick in,
claimin’ “your art speaks to you”…
nah bro — those voices aren’t real, quit pretendin’.
 
Talked about success — “heavyweight on the threads,”
but really you spend every day on the Web,
28 with no friends,
heavy set, heavy breaths —
you ain’t makin’ your steps,
just makin’ excuses, fakin’ your rep,
ashamed and depressed —
hang up the pen,
no one relates to the pages you’ve bled.
 
Basement creations ain’t amazin’ or blessed —
you’re just obsessed, repressin’ regrets,
livin’ stressed with no sex, no progress, no checks —
I dissect every defect,
every weakness you defend just feeds death.
 
With this diss dialect I leave zeros with two options:
Move silent — fight the feral voices in your conscience —
or face exposure like the emperor’s robes —
naked truths, no cloth hidin’ your nonsense.
 
Friendly or enemy close — it’s a coin flip,
you’re a snake with poison you spit,
can’t appreciate the depth of the koi fish,
FYI — starin’ is rude,
so I toss cheer into the void quick — boy, this
shit is harder to explain than the struggle you avoidin’.
 
But when it comes to bars?
This lyricist is the hardest in existence,
haters can’t knock it — it’s all about who aims the farthest,
and The Great Nate carved this target,
locked the game down — name carved in the cartridge,
pumped in your veins — sharp as a blade in the darkness.
 
Make no mistake — I’ll make you a heartless no‑brainer,
rip out the heart, then the brain —
watch the blood waterfall like rainstorms breakin’ the plains —
I got faith the whole world’ll feel me
like drops of rain engravin’ their names
in the dirt where your coffin lays.

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NJKG
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