Battles NJKG vs user405499374
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- While most compare, I ghost ‘em bare — they toast in pairs of broken chairs
- No one dared to approach the flare, I spoke with glare and broke the heir of every throne they own
- I’m war in bone, I wrote in tears then I spit a solar flare through a frozen prayer
- then blow the air out ya dome — like you tried to clone a throne with no despair, foldin' squares
- I hold affairs with coded lairs in open snares, go ahead.. hope I care
- but I'm known to tear through smoke & glare, loaded stare, my quotes impair flows of rare emotions there
- they said I’m high? Nah, I’m upper-dimensional with clenched fists
- made of sequels that turned "fallen angel" into a genre for my equals after I wrote bars so sharp
- the echo killed a hundred people with rhymes clearer than their Jesus in the steeple, as Gods watched me
- scribe and asked, “who made this rebel?” I smiled then replied: the glitch in every angels level
- that wrote with stress and stainless metal which broke through
- every cage they settled then returned with wordplay laced in plague and sacred treble
- I collapse ‘em in a pattern like religion in a chasm, split a vision
- with a prism, then deliver it in sarcasm like any tryna rival and match me gets disfigured in the atoms
- I'm more than ten steps ahead of your temple, dismembering methods with emphasis
- I'm thinking 8 more than 92, every letters a hex I'll press pen to dispense the deadliest blemishes
- making U tremble in premises as I mentally pummel with penmanship
- fuck a friendly battle, I'll sever that sentiment with seven-inch sentences
- My weapons a message that etches regret in the edge of your head
- so the second you choose to breathe, I’m stretchin’ the lead
- I don't just bring the smoke, I live inside combustion where percussion is discussion for the suffering of function
- No sunlit path — just the ash from collapsed faith due to U gasped late and deaths a mixtape you can’t unplay
- I don't battle to win — I battle to haunt, that's why when you sleep, my rhyme schemes breathe in each dream you want.
- scratch that.. whack rap.... / I'd rather split your clone in dimensions I’ve written poems
- and make each quote a prism stone that splits your brittle dome also charred metaphors
- that spark like a martyr’s scorn to dismantle your image like a pastor who guards porn
- I light flames on their stage — now the hate been born, it's their fault because they tried to blackball a legend
- now the blade get drawn, I’m cuttin’ through fools like I trained with Spawn
- the flips quick—full-on drama queen, dismissin’ bars like “immature,”
- sayin’ it’s obscene... Bitch, my diss started light, a joke off the dome,
- Then I thought, why not go hard, crack his fragile home?
- Especially since it’s rare I get angles so precise,
- Exposin’ his façade, slice by slice.
- If he tries to claim the right to define meaning’s essence,
- While bender-stealin’, flexin’ bars with false pretense,
- Every vibe-checker’s gonna see through the mask—
- Then I’ll drain his pockets, leave his wallet gashed.
- Just as easy as dumping buckets
- of cold water on a flame he couldn’t pluck it
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I was born in chains, Virginia dirt roads,
- Dreams locked up heart heavy with loads.
- They say I wasn’t free couldn't make no stand
- But I had fire in my soul, and a plan in my hand.
- When Lafayette came, I said “come, let me go”
- I’ll serve this cause I'll learn then I’ll know
- He saw my eyes yeah, he saw that fire,
- Said okay James, time to be america’s liar
- I was the spy behind enemy lines,
- Feeding the truth through secret signs.
- They never knew the dude pouring their tea, ]
- Was breaking their empire quietly.
- I walked through camp with a mask on my face
- every whisper counted, every word was a case
- Risked my life for a dream not mine,
- But I made it mine through pain and time
- Cornwallis thought I was one of his men.
- Said “James, I trust you” I said “say it again”
- Played loyal, played dumb I studied their plans,
- Every route, every map, every slight of their hands.
- Then I slipped word back to Marquis to know where to seek
- Told him where them strike told him where they'd be
- Each message I sent every coded page,
- Brought the British one step closer to the cage.
- Yorktown fell, and the world turned upside down
- Freedom rang but I was shackled down.
- Fought for liberty, but mine denied
- Still I held my head, and oh, I had my pride.
- I was the spy behind enemy lines,
- Feeding the truth through secret signs.
- They never knew the dude pouring their tea,
- Was breaking their empire quietly.
- I risked it all when I crossed that wall,
- Knew one trip up and I'd lose it all.
- But history remembers the brave who try,
- And I, I was the spy.