Battles  YoungLogic vs overload

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YoungLogic won this battle!

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Battle on September 17 2015

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Tell that nigga i was sorry/
  • paid attention to him hardly/
  • lived life like a giant party/
  • i should have listened to you marty/
  • partly/cause it was mandatory/
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  • Little Brother Little Brother i love you so/
  • Wish i could have sat back and watched you grow/
  • momma said it was my fucking fault for your death/
  • shot up on the damn block lifeless, cold, & dead/
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  • My own brother, flesh and blood/
  • beloved/ you tried for so many years to construct/
  • a bond i never let happen destruct/
  • somewhat/cause i was jealous of your blood/
  • You used to yell and say don't go out tonight/
  • flight/ out the door in spite/
  • im heading for the darkness while your heading for light/
  • you implied/ and asked if everything is alright/
  • pushed you out of my life/ holding onto my pride/
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  • Little Brother Little Brother i love you so/
  • Wish i could have sat back and watched you grow/
  • momma said it was my fucking fault for your death/
  • shot up on the damn block lifeless, cold, & dead/
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  • Should have talked to you more/
  • before those dudes morphed/
  • and scorched/ your life torn/
  • now you laying in the ground a cold corpse/
  • should have ended it in court/
  • Don't you see/
  • looking down from heaven on me/
  • i know you can foresee/ and guarantee/
  • im bound for hell not once, twice, but three/
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  • Little Brother Little Brother i love you so/
  • Wish i could have sat back and watched you grow/
  • momma said it was my fucking fault for you death/
  • shot up on the damn block lifeless, cold, & dead/

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • let me start with tellin ya a story
  • im gettin pick on and bull-ied
  • no matter what territ-ory
  • im in, couldnt even pretend that i had a friend, to lend
  • me a hand, i cant withstand another backhand,
  • wish i could hide but im like sand
  • youll see me everywhere you go
  • so someone help me befo i git hit by this torpedo
  • why cant i hide, why cant i be Incognito
  • there drink my blood like a Mosquito
  • i cant take the pain anymore i think i hit my limit
  • are you happy now, i cant obtain this anymore im not afraid to ambit
  • if your wondering why you havent seen me in a minute
  • i was in a coma and those fags are they ones who put me in it!
  • now at the time i was 13 trin' to get by wit my dope rhymes
  • but the kids who were to cool for school thought they were the whirlpool
  • and i was just a small Molecule, and claiming theyll destroy me in a battle to
  • but they were wrong i always had a dream as a teen
  • to be on a front cover of a rap magazine
  • Automatically i stared writing rhymes to fill my pockets shooting rockets
  • and i couldnt stop it, so i decided to become famous and make a profit
  • i can give a damn what a hater says to me
  • but just git outta my way, this is something imma be
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