Battles  YoungLogic vs overload

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Battle on September 22 2015

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I'll be rapping about my life/
  • my past and me are to reunite/
  • telling you of my struggles in spite/
  • of my views and their crooked sights/
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  • I started way back in that crowded house/
  • i saw my mom chillin with him and doused/
  • in that liquor, she preferred to drink/
  • all prettied up and fucking silver pink/
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  • She fell from the chair and hit her head/
  • all stone like/, frozen in midflight/,
  • and hit the pavement cold dead/
  • but instead of crying/, i thought about dying/, and rhymin/ and all the things i could be buying/
  • and how far i could be climin/ to the top of that indestructible mountain/,
  • i could be the captain/ not to mention/ the tension/
  • that would be on my shoulders
  • I don't give a fuck im hard as rocks, hard as boulders

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • yo here we go
  • im taking this game home
  • all alone, rhymes off the dome
  • all i need is a pen, pad and a microphone
  • im grown, im stone im on my own
  • poor no money, not even cheep cologne
  • baggy cloths, thats only supposed to keep me warm
  • im a wreck, work with this 9 to 5 for a lousy check
  • loss 35 pounds, havent ate, im hungry
  • if i ever get food i get a beat and my food is taken from me
  • cant even afford to record my music so ill never achieve an award
  • last night i had nowhere to go so i broke in to a ford Accordjust to get some shut eye
  • but of course it was occupy by some girl givin' head to a guy
  • no where to sleep, wish i would just die
  • but god keeps tellin' me i must survive
  • sooner or later he told me my wings are gonna fly
  • told me to hold on and wait for the worst days to get by
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