Black poetry

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//intro
 
//note: these line repeat constantly,
//overlapping with eachother, understandable at first
//But slowly getting more angry, overlapped more
//Until drums step in and the overlapping sound
//like a high pitches scream because of the many lines stacked.
//Then it cuts completely.
//
Listen closely to eachother
Listen closely to eachother
Listen closely to eachother
Listen closely to eachother
Listen closely to eachother
Listen closely to eachother
Listen closely to eachother
 
//silence for a few seconds
 
//verse 1(ideas)
That's what she said.(calm)
Poetry, like her pretty words.
Poetry, opinion metaphors.
 
(starting to get questioning and quicker)
What is a label but sinner's worth?
What is an animal's win on earth?
What is- uh
What is my climax after the intro verse?
What is my climax after the intro verse?(scream)
 
//part 2 (drum based beat like kendricks "united in grief beat switch)
Went to school,
Back packed, ready to argue.
Words or art, whats my pursue.
Looked around, sea full of fish.
What better art then anthropology.
Eyes low, shapes got into the soul of me.
Look back,
Don't react, i found you.
Illiterade, can't read the rules, ask what you do.
Voice deep, responds "what a view".
Picasso in flesh, you think you deserve it?
Worship of flesh, look up before you pervert it.
 
(Distorted sounds like in kanye's "On sight" get added)
 
//chorus
I know you're dreaming-
I know-
I know-
I know you're dreaming man.
Listen when she speaks that-
Black poetry (very emphesized)
Black poetry (very emphesized)
Listen when he speaks that-
Black poetry (very emphesized)
Black poetry (very emphesized)
Don't get lost in time.
Words are just hatecrime.
We hate on eachother at the same time.
At the same time.
 
//Verse 2
 
Take a good first look.
Shame on me for my long look.
But if you never had a look,
Feel free to throw the first rock.
No matter if:
English,
Español,
Or Mongol.
If you come from the garden,
Your words need a Godly pardon.
Instead of using your tongue, as a sharpened blade.
Help me recover from my fallen state.
 
//chorus
I know you're dreaming-
I know-
I know-
I know you're dreaming man.
Listen when she speaks that-
Black poetry (very emphesized)
Black poetry (very emphesized)
Listen when he speaks that-
Black poetry (very emphesized)
Black poetry (very emphesized)
Don't get lost in time.
Words are just hatecrime.
We hate on eachother at the same time.
At the same time.
 
//outro
Language is power,
Meaning is ours.
Choose to damn me?
Or help me reach eternal life.

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