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Filler Words: Pt-2 Adverbs, Nouns, and Clichés
- Do you want your writing to get noticed –in a good way? Ditch these over used
- adverbs, nouns, and clichés when writing articles, stories, books and even rhymes.
- These may not always work in rhymes though they come in handy to know in all
- aspects of writing.
- Ditch these boring words and phrases! Stop using amorphous adverbs and
- namby pamby nouns! Delete crummy clichés! And, here are 50 over used
- words and phrases in writing –which I hope helps you become a more successful,
- confident writer. Compiling this list has certainly opened my eyes to my own
- weak writing habits…
- The following “over used words in writing” aren’t necessarily on the no fly list –in fact,
- writers can use them and get delicious results in many circumstances! These adjectives
- just need to be used creatively and carefully, is all.
- Over Used Adjectives in Writing:
- A noun is a person, place, or thing –and an adjective should describe the noun in more
- detail (eg, “successful writers”). Some writing teachers say that adjectives are wholly
- unnecessary, while others advise writers to use sparingly. It’s up to you, fellow scribes
- to feel them out and learn when to use them...
- Here are 20 that can fit in with my Fill Words and some may have been mentioned
- Already Im just trying to shine some more light onto these words in general.
- 1. Many
- 2. Pretty
- 3. Nice
- 4. Kind
- 5. Pleasant
- 6. Tall/short/fat/skinny
- 7. Big/little
- 8. Shimmering
- 9. Absolutely
- 10. Same exact
- 11. Truly unique
- 12. Quite
- 13. Funny
- 14. Incredible
- 15. A lot
- 16. Bad/good
- 17. Roaring
- 18. Interesting
- 19. Amazing
- 20. Any
- “As to the adjective, when in doubt, strike it out.” Mark Twain.
- Writing tip: Replace your boring over used tired limp adjectives
- with strong nouns (eg, instead of “successfully obtains”, use “wins”).
- Using too many adjectives is a common writing mistake for all writers –
- not just newbies.
- Over used Adverbs in Writing
- A verb contains all the action: writing, editing, getting published, signing
- copies of your book for fans. An adverb helps describe the action, and can
- often be unnecessary (see? I used “often be”, which is totally unnecessary.
- So is “totally”! You see how difficult good writing is?).
- 1. Very
- 2. So
- 3. Kind of
- 4. Really
- 5. Totally
- 6. Actually
- 7. Seems
- 8. Suddenly
- 9. Probably
- 10. Could have
- 11. Hopefully
- 12. Just
- 13. Perfect
- 14. Viciously
- 15. Usually
- Fellow scribes, remember that an over used adverb can taste delicious when
- used in a surprising way.
- Over Used Clichés in Writing
- “Any great truth can –and eventually will –be expressed as a cliché…
- and a cliché is a sure and certain way to dilute an idea.” Solomon Short.
- 1. Writing on the wall
- 2. Cry over spilled milk
- 3. Better late than never
- 4. Think outside the box
- 5. At the end of the day
- 6. The bottom line
- 7. It’s not rocket science
- 8. Easy as pie
- 9. Smart as a whip
- 10. Taking candy from a baby
- 11. Love makes the world go ‘round
- 12. Selling like hotcakes
- 13. In the nick of time
- 14. Go get ‘em, tiger!
- 15. When life gives you lemons…
- These words and frases are some that you want to try and steer clear of
- and be as visual in your writing as possible.
- Last I will give some tired words that are overused and again more active
- less commonly used words should be used when possible:
- 1. Amazing
- 2. Awfully
- 3. beautiful
- 4. fine
- 5. good
- 6. great
- 7. happy
- 8. look
- 9. said
- 10. very
- 11. well
- I hope you enjoyed this and took something away from it with you. One Love Peeps
- Remember these are not written in stone they are the most common.
What is a Blueprint?
A blueprint is like a report card for your lyrics. It contains a lyrical breakdown and analysis of all the words, syllables, and rhymes in your song.
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