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Refutations (Echoes Diss)
- your names the tell, echo was the nymph who could only repeat what shed heard
- narcissus ignored her, kept staring at himself, now read back your whole third
- every bar you wrote about me starts with my name and ends with your preferred word
- you diagnosed me with your own symptoms, thats projection dressed as a diss, thats absurd
- you said I pre excuse when punches miss but melvilles editors said moby dick was dead
- called it overwrought, said cut the whales, simplify, give the readers something instead
- he didnt, now every MFA program on the planet has that book above their head
- so when you play the editor and tell me strip the depth, just know theyre always wrong, thats what I said
- you want instant impact? tell that to the crowd that booed stravins off the stage
- RoS premiere, a riot broke out, critics called it noise, front page rage
- now its canon so your arguments a cage
- the crowds reaction in the moment has always been the least reliable gauge
- you hammered connection in every closing line like repetition makes a point true
- thats epistrophe, gorgias invented it to manufacture feeling without a clue
- you used the sophists trick to call ME the one whos hollow through
- the rhetorical device you weaponized against depth was itself the proof of what you do
- took you thirteen lines to land a two word defense
- the bar about not needing setup... needed setup, that shit makes no sense
- you used complexity to argue for simplicity, thats your own cost and expense
- the irony dont need explaining, the contradictions already too dense
- you said I write for admiration of structure, missed the whole design intent
- hagia wasnt built for the crowd that stood around the day it went
- it was built for the ones centuries forward, staring up in wonderment
- you build for the room, I build for what survives when every room is spent
- so go connect the crowd, perform the ritual, collect the nods tonight
- pauls letters to the churches werent performed in front of anyone in sight
- they beheaded him, hes still speaking two thousand fucking years in the light
- what have you bled for the craft? a diss that wont exist come saturday night
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