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Dissected II (Aryeh Response)
- spelled phenomenal, incredible, remarkable, exceptional,
- four synonyms gift wrapped in an acrostic
- the spelling bee approach to battle rap is the most diagnostic
- symptom a writer can submit, the most prognostic
- tell that the bars beneath the gimmick stay agnostic
- toward substance, the acrostic is the scaffolding erected
- when the building underneath cant stand unprotected
- four adjectives self selected, self directed,
- self graded, self awarded, self reflected
- back to the writer like a mirror praising the reflection
- you like narcissus, you drowning pursuing your own perfection
- he myths the warning, not the glorification section
- you built the whole opener on that specific misdirection
- guess lebron tall tales stitched together at the seam
- the telegraphed punchline visible upstream
- before the bar arrived, the photographic dream
- of surprise that never registered, the cream
- puff punch, looks dense, structurally hollow at the bite
- the setup carried the destinations weight in plain sight
- elite punchlines move through the blind spot, ignite
- the cognition after landing, yours announced the flight
- path, altitude, coordinates, estimated arrival time
- then landed exactly where predicted, the paradigm
- of the bar that works against itself, the pantomime
- of the unexpected wearing the expecteds crime
- twelve consecutive Ms cascading, guess my shit is meticulous
- the phonemic wallpaper masquerading as the ridiculous
- precision of the technical, the promiscuous
- deployment of alliteration, the insidious
- confusion between the texture and the density
- rakims internal architecture carried immensity
- because the meaning matched the propensity
- for sound, yours is sound outrunning the intensity
- heaven sent hellish bars are here, the oxymoron
- retired somewhere around two thousand and four, worn
- smooth by ten thousand rappers, the horn
- that everybody blew until the brass was torn
- from the instrument, thats not a striking image anymore
- thats furniture, upholstery, the revolving door
- phrase that enters every battle raps first floor
- before the writer finds the original, the score
- settled by the timestamp, three days deep, jonah landed
- veterans responded, the whole thread expanded
- aryeh arrived after the verdict was branded
- into the record, after the room already handed
- down the conclusion, filed the diss
- into a closed case, the analysis
- of the latecomer, the nemesis
- who shows up after the genesis
- already happened, claiming the championship
- belt mid ceremony, the relationship
- between the timing and the authorship
- mattering more than the sportsmanship
- the general consensus claim requires the general
- the census, the agreement, ephemeral
- self appointment, the peripheral
- vision mistaking the monocle for peripheral
- omniscience, you see one angle clearly
- call it the complete view sincerely
- the battle rap museum curator, merely
- cataloguing what preceded, severely
- underestimating what arrived, three days
- a weeks worth of veterans in a daze
- aryeh timestamped late into the haze
- already settled, claiming the ablaze
- building as his fire, but im the arsonist
- the evidence, the protagonist
- the antagonist, the lyricist
- who walked in and the whole list
- reorganized itself accordingly
- ready, set, dead landed awkwardly
- on the wrong subject, the extraordinarily
- misaimed title, the cartography
- wrong before the first bar drew breath
- ready, set, dead was your own depth
- charge, detonated beneath
- your own hull, count underneath
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