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Shiver Me Kimbers (X-Factor Diss)
- (KeyJ)
- Here's a kid, he likes hip hop and rappin' shit
- So what you do?
- You take him under X Factor's wing
- And everything seems fine, but that's half the thing
- The other half are jumpin' down on Xdaddy's dick
- See, I was tought 'bout sacred things, like a father and mother
- Not a group of pedophiles that probably fuck eachother
- Call us the fantastic four, lil' bitch, we won here
- So why don't you tie a noose and kick down your cuck chair?
- You rap neutered, act so ballsy, madly corny
- So how the fuck can you talk, Mr. Male Pattern Baldness?
- And just GenX is too long for a faggot like you,
- That fuckin' 9/11 pilot shoulda crashed into you
- Instead he crashed somewhere, like your rap career,
- After we bash your damn brains in as you hide in fear
- We know you act superior, time to act sincere
- You type tough all day through a blackened mirror
- But now it's time to face consequences, know that day comin'
- Just waitin' for you to slip and say somethin'
- So stay runnin' away from the problems, bitch you ain't nothin'
- Long as you behind the screen I'll be sleepin' like day, sonny
- See son, some men like to lie, cheat, and steal
- But at least we aren't desperate 'nough to try freaky shit
- Except you groom, touch, perv, AND molest, hoe
- So you should kill yourself, write four names in your manifesto
- (Kunta)
- I'm not gonna demise my eyes see your cries, gen
- I see your disguise, gen, and wealth? I despise you type of men
- Im precise, you deny, I dice and slice fuck you and your clout, your size
- beat em to a pulp, I'm a pastor tho, and the pope, you guys cope about your rize
- you say you pour cries but it's all a lie, fuck y'all blueprint, y'all wished
- you had a hint or a scent that dispensed of skill, but no, it's just thrill and piss
- but who's the best MC? kalli, kun, KO, key, who you tryna be, you diagnose faggotry
- like you're apart of MD, wealth, I heard homophobia bad for yo health
- you worry about others but never care for yourself
- screamin' fuck twelve, gen, but you in the burbs
- talk shit and prop disses one more time and you in the birds
- bastards question if niggas have a weapon but let me give you a lesson
- I'm settin' the scale, and you speak on jesus, God, then you die, ashes in the grail for a pessim'
- nigga, these my homeboys, I'm rhyming with the Gods, say no beef tryna stay anonymous
- then you diss and scream "guess what time it is" then you get yo soul done in some signin' shit
- nigga, art of hip hop, part and you flip flop like seas outta water, and gen? your a deadbeat
- for your online daughter, it's a slaughterhouse I'ma martyr, I'm sharper, godfather
- this goes for gen, wealth, shayd, Nick, PCK, pick your lane
- are you sick or tame? you can't fix the box after I shift the frame
- you risk your name while I split your brain leave you sick with pain
- you all lame, gen, genuine question do you have the intention to
- spread genes to minors? or pull a five niner? either way, respond, your on a timer
- shot clock violation, nigga, top spot domimation
- this a X Fact, this a new hot block conversation
- cut off and converse in a verse your blood clot circulation
- call it a jump shot calibration, nigga
- (Kalligraphy)
- Did something occur is Gen’s oogenesis?
- Old head proclaiming me as his nemesis?
- If he’s really fifty then his logic need legs:
- It’s like me beefing with an unfertilized egg
- I put you and X Factor inside a Punnit chart
- And sort y’all out to see who’s really smart
- That’s 0/63 on the intelligence of art
- You’re a bunch of fake hypotheticals, hypertechinals
- Clinging on to easy rhymes, all is forgettable
- Mrs Officer, Mrs Officer, please look through this man’s phone
- This guy really thinks he’s the plug like Al Capone
- How old is Shayd_Gray, somewhere in her teens?
- 50 and you saying she’s your homegirl, that’s EDP
- That’s freaky shit, honestly I think your posing as this beast
- Who feasts for fame cuz he couldn’t get it in the streets
- Couldn’t get the recognition cuz he ran away from beefs
- Figured his speech can maybe get him some Steez
- Like geez, he getting drunk of the Corona
- I’d push your street down like CATs, and takeover like King Cobras
- Check your motor, it’s in a bad condition
- Road to Heaven? Nah you on the road to Perdition
- (KO Doomzday)
- Yo, I heard the wealthy master whips PCK and he enjoys it
- 60 members, only 10 are loyal and all are choiceless
- You got disloyalty in yo group, Gen, I know you think you in control
- But id be lying if I told you there wasn't any moles
- Wealth tryna flex but I know that hes in Gens pants
- PCK from the burbs, but now he wanna step back
- You saying you a killer from Baltimore and cause danger
- But you gave up on Bunny, I guess she was a failure
- Then you gave up on Alex, treated her like a stranger
- Saying its all about jealousy, and how you making the bangers
- I tried to have an honest conversation, but Gen
- Power got to your head and now its running you thin
- And nick tryna bootlick his way to the top
- But imma still diss him whether hes thankful or not
- And fuck annotations, you gon read this through and figure what im saying
- You running your mouth with disrespect, why does the finger cause you pain?
- I used to look up to you before you was a dictator
- So fuck you and your group, and your 60 dick glazers
- Uh, bitch
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- Skit
- KO Doomzday:
- Gen: Did they see my A+ raps? Me and my 15 yr old homegirls are Baltimore killers!
- Nick and Wealth: Ok king Jeezy!
- Gen: OH MY GOD KUNTA KALLI KO AND KEY J ITS THE KKK THATS WHAT IMMA DISS THEM ABT
- *Doorbell rings*
- Gen: Nick, open that like a good boy.
- Nick: Okay, master.
- *Nick opens the door*
- JiDion: So Michael, why are you calling 15 year olds your homegirls?
- Gen: IM A BALTIMORE KILLER!! YOU ARE ALL JEALOUS CUZ IM THE BIGGEST AND BEST
- *police show up to arrest Gen*
- Gen: YOU ARE ALL JEALOUS MY GROUP KNOWS THE TRUTH!!!!
- Kalligraphy: NAH KO that shits gonna happen one day 100%. “But my A+ raps means I can talk to minors!”
- Kalligraphy: I mean what the how many times do you use the same rhyme scheme and still be confident you're good at rapping— like, Gen really posts the worst trap beats ever, alongside a song that can’t flow…? Bro and Nick 😭holy cornball, ticky ticky tock, you grab Gens sticky sticky cock. Like, telling me I ain’t got lyricism. And wealth? Yeah bro can’t put out a conceptual song for the life of him am I right? I mean X Factor has like, what, 5 people actually doing shit? What happened Gen? Can’t manage a group? No one cares for your group anymore? Little Baltimore killer 🥀🥀
- KEYJ:
- Alright Gen, I know it's hard for you to be chill with this, especially cause you get validation from the internet
- But maybe it's time to go outside, take care of your kids, and not the Baltimore side
- Nick, you can hop up off his dick, if your ass isn't prolapsed you could do your shtick
- Go outside for once, maybe you can see the sky and feel
- "Maybe I shouldn't be on a site wit' 50 year old guys in it"
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