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Deadbeat Mother
- Name’s Haley, likes to spread her legs for the guys
- Here lately, she has one focused in her eyes
- Realized he wasn’t the type to believe lies,
- so she makes up an act, of a past she left behind
- the first time he laid eyes on her he was shook,
- not focusing on her words, just her looks
- he likes her blonde hair, beautiful skin that glows every time he glares,
- Stares at her tits, his hormones hits,
- Eyes wonders down to her ass, he’s in love with her body, shaped like an hour glass
- He wanted to smash and dash, but the more he talked to her, the more he’s attached
- before he asks, he wanted to see if she’s truthful
- or disguising lies with a mask
- She talks about her past, explains how her last relationship didn’t last
- she was mistreated, mentally and physically beaten
- He sees past her looks, a reason to love again he’s hooked
- Goes on telling her how he was cheated on with three black guys
- tired of history repeating love is whack why try?
- she responded “listen not every girl is the same let show you why I’m different “
- As long as this commitment stays persistent n your loves not a lie
- I don’t want this first hello, to turn into our last goodbye
- This is how everything began, I was the one who built her up every time she’d rant,
- Finally I had thought my wish was been granted,
- I was wrong cause now look where we are standing.....
- (A year later.....)
- at month ten she was pregnant with this kid,
- outside he acted excited ,inside he wasn’t ready for this
- The thought of abortion hit, but he wanted to start a family
- thought maybe there was a benefit
- thought god had granted his first wish
- (The baby’s birthday )
- Their daughter is born, first time holding her she was warm
- Heart paced, mind had an empty space, sitting here hoping this time wasn’t going to waste
- he embraced the moment,
- erased the thoughts of her being a whore,
- by friends who told him the day before
- that she was cheating with her cousin
- his daughter was the reason he could function
- happy with his fiancé, wondering why his friends would make that assumption
- (3 months later )
- Haley claimed Connor was doing enough,
- he was working, going to college, understanding the timing is tough
- so he quits school to focus on supporting
- the two women he’s adoring
- never realized it was something she was forcing
- hoping there was another blessing god was storing
- (3 weeks before they broke up)
- Every payday Haley would have Connors check spent
- On her nails, hair and sandals, never able to pay rent
- this bullshit he can no longer handle
- For the last three weeks, she’s been
- keeping a thug at the house, had him sleep on the couch
- was just “helping him out “,let him do drugs at their place
- lied to his face, Put his foot down,
- Told him to get out, it caused Haley to scream and shout
- Making a scene out loud,
- Cuss words dropping from each other’s mouths,
- Then her mom came in asking what was everything all about?
- (The day they broke up )
- April 29th, 2019
- Because Connor made such an issue,
- she told him “we’re done this relationship can’t continue “
- He tried to fix her with the right tools,
- she said “this was the last straw goodnight I’m done, no changing the past “
- Everything happened so fast, he can’t believe he let so much time passed
- walks into a different room, checks his phone
- she’s posted I’m single all over social media, he throws his phone
- Started punching the walls till he saw bone,
- got on knees and crawled to his bed, sleeping without Haley
- He felt so alone, but the situation was something he can no longer condone
- (Present Day )
- Broke mom leaves her baby to party with friends
- comes home drunk (4:47 am )can smell Captain Morgan on her breath
- Cigarette in her fingers, another gateway to her death,
- thought leaving Connor was best,
- all he wants is a relationship with his daughter, she won’t let him take a step
- started a new chapter with her cousin two days after the break up
- Friends were right she was a whore, should’ve listened when they’ve told him before
- instead he ignored
- in order to rights over his kid, he’s gotta take her to court,
- being civil she’s despised his support,
- this is his last resort,
- He supports his daughters needs,
- she’s on his mind every time his heart skips a beat
- Haley’s using their daughter payslee as ammunition,
- wounds him, he’s in bad condition, barely breathing
- and the bitch will keep shooting till he drops dead and his body’s bleeding
- THE END...
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