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Deadbeat Mother

  1. Name’s Haley, likes to spread her legs for the guys
  2. Here lately, she has one focused in her eyes
  3. Realized he wasn’t the type to believe lies,
  4. so she makes up an act, of a past she left behind
  5. the first time he laid eyes on her he was shook,
  6. not focusing on her words, just her looks
  7. he likes her blonde hair, beautiful skin that glows every time he glares,
  8. Stares at her tits, his hormones hits,
  9. Eyes wonders down to her ass, he’s in love with her body, shaped like an hour glass
  10. He wanted to smash and dash, but the more he talked to her, the more he’s attached
  11. before he asks, he wanted to see if she’s truthful
  12. or disguising lies with a mask
  13.  
  14. She talks about her past, explains how her last relationship didn’t last
  15. she was mistreated, mentally and physically beaten
  16. He sees past her looks, a reason to love again he’s hooked
  17.  
  18. Goes on telling her how he was cheated on with three black guys
  19. tired of history repeating love is whack why try?
  20. she responded listen not every girl is the same let show you why I’m different
  21. As long as this commitment stays persistent n your loves not a lie
  22. I don’t want this first hello, to turn into our last goodbye
  23.  
  24. This is how everything began, I was the one who built her up every time she’d rant,
  25. Finally I had thought my wish was been granted,
  26. I was wrong cause now look where we are standing.....
  27.  
  28. (A year later.....)
  29.  
  30. at month ten she was pregnant with this kid,
  31. outside he acted excited ,inside he wasn’t ready for this
  32. The thought of abortion hit, but he wanted to start a family
  33. thought maybe there was a benefit
  34. thought god had granted his first wish
  35.  
  36. (The baby’s birthday )
  37.  
  38. Their daughter is born, first time holding her she was warm
  39. Heart paced, mind had an empty space, sitting here hoping this time wasn’t going to waste
  40. he embraced the moment,
  41. erased the thoughts of her being a whore,
  42. by friends who told him the day before
  43. that she was cheating with her cousin
  44. his daughter was the reason he could function
  45. happy with his fiancé, wondering why his friends would make that assumption
  46.  
  47. (3 months later )
  48.  
  49. Haley claimed Connor was doing enough,
  50. he was working, going to college, understanding the timing is tough
  51. so he quits school to focus on supporting
  52. the two women he’s adoring
  53. never realized it was something she was forcing
  54. hoping there was another blessing god was storing
  55.  
  56.  
  57. (3 weeks before they broke up)
  58.  
  59. Every payday Haley would have Connors check spent
  60. On her nails, hair and sandals, never able to pay rent
  61. this bullshit he can no longer handle
  62. For the last three weeks, she’s been
  63. keeping a thug at the house, had him sleep on the couch
  64. was just helping him out “,let him do drugs at their place
  65. lied to his face, Put his foot down,
  66. Told him to get out, it caused Haley to scream and shout
  67. Making a scene out loud,
  68. Cuss words dropping from each other’s mouths,
  69. Then her mom came in asking what was everything all about?
  70.  
  71.  
  72. (The day they broke up )
  73. April 29th, 2019
  74.  
  75. Because Connor made such an issue,
  76. she told him we’re done this relationship can’t continue
  77. He tried to fix her with the right tools,
  78. she said this was the last straw goodnight I’m done, no changing the past
  79. Everything happened so fast, he can’t believe he let so much time passed
  80. walks into a different room, checks his phone
  81. she’s posted I’m single all over social media, he throws his phone
  82. Started punching the walls till he saw bone,
  83. got on knees and crawled to his bed, sleeping without Haley
  84. He felt so alone, but the situation was something he can no longer condone
  85.  
  86.  
  87. (Present Day )
  88.  
  89. Broke mom leaves her baby to party with friends
  90. comes home drunk (4:47 am )can smell Captain Morgan on her breath
  91. Cigarette in her fingers, another gateway to her death,
  92. thought leaving Connor was best,
  93. all he wants is a relationship with his daughter, she won’t let him take a step
  94. started a new chapter with her cousin two days after the break up
  95. Friends were right she was a whore, should’ve listened when they’ve told him before
  96. instead he ignored
  97. in order to rights over his kid, he’s gotta take her to court,
  98. being civil she’s despised his support,
  99. this is his last resort,
  100.  
  101. He supports his daughters needs,
  102. she’s on his mind every time his heart skips a beat
  103. Haley’s using their daughter payslee as ammunition,
  104. wounds him, he’s in bad condition, barely breathing
  105. and the bitch will keep shooting till he drops dead and his body’s bleeding
  106.  
  107.  
  108. THE END...
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