Battles  ForeverLucid vs FamesGame

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Show your technical skill and broad vocabulary if you want, thats the angle i'm taking. Just interested in what this battle turns out like!

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • this lackadaisical description, obstructed viewful polluted fiction,
  • just evidently exemplifies the sheer state of my addiction
  • i abuse every wordful phrase rewritten, ignoring my prescription
  • goosebumps and tingling is all im feeling, selfishly i'm smitten
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  • beautifully ethereal, adventurously spontaneously empircal
  • constructed exterior metallic shell, quick silver in mint imperial
  • trivial criminal material, repeating murders, till its serial
  • bazookas being bacterial, directing cells like a boss, its managerial
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  • adaptation with satiation showing degradation and a recreation
  • systematically multiplication, with rainbow like gradiation
  • stations radiation, needing patience and meditation
  • introspective exploration, till we're teleporting and levitating
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  • oxymorons, and paradoxes that i find ironic
  • hypocritical hedgehogs with a speed thats supersonic
  • crushing pain i feel is chronic, so i consolidate all upon it
  • self prescribed guy, to optimise and facilitise with my tonics
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  • i'm credible, and unforgettable, medically im just incredible
  • this spectacle, is impeccable, the cerebral frontal lobal's susceptable
  • im flexible, and selectable, its acceptable and electrical
  • im somehow edible, and sensible, and can remain undetectable
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  • characters are my collectibles, and architectures all alphabetical
  • dialectable and hypothetical, intellectually unconventional
  • professionally reassembled, receptively presentable
  • venting tentacles so unacceptable, hysterical its confessional
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  • aquatically i try and breathe, octopus living deep beneath the sea
  • a creature with no knees, dependent squid flowing with ease
  • magic tricks up all eight sleeves, and speaking in japanese
  • a mollusc actually speaking bollocks, and i'm actually vietnamese

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • ***Not a diss***
  • Damn. When I hear that sound,
  • My heart starts to pound.
  • Music is my life,
  • Music is my wife.
  • I'm so dedicated, I don't think twice.
  • Rap is a gift, but I'm paying the price.
  • Whether you make it or not is based on the roll of a dice.
  • But I don't care.
  • And I won't bare,
  • Another night under your stare.
  • I'm leaving to make it.
  • You better start believing or fake it.
  • I know think your better than me,
  • But give it a few years and you'll see;
  • That I made it.
  • And I just hope to death,
  • One day you'll understand that I'm not stupid,
  • Just ambitious for something because deep down I'm just a kid.
  • But I'll give up everything to make it.
  • Rap is my pride and your not gonna break it.
  • My fear is asleep and you're not gonna wake it.
  • How many ways do I have to translate it?
  • I know one day I'll rise up,
  • And you'll mean nothing more than the liquor in the bottom of my cup.
  • I'm gonna be the one busting a beat.
  • And you're gonna be the one kneeling at my feet.
  • And you'll turn up the radio to get my lyrics outta your head.
  • Then the radio plays my song instead.
  • And my lyrics will subtly say.
  • I told you so.

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