Battles CarlCee vs Mercury
RULES
Don't diss me, Rap about your dream, success and failure
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I heard emcees talking about their dreams
- but mine are different they are living inside ma veins
- i dreamed to be successful as fuck
- but every chance i got was followed by a damn bad luck
- i'm racing the time beating ma clock
- kicking away failure's smog
- while people say '' you're crock go consult a fucken doc''
- thinking they are advising me in fact their words was like an electric shock,
- i tried to try to amok, dock, block failure's storm like hancock
- telling it to stop but that didn't work
- now i had no choice but to squawk like an angry hawk
- look it's like l'm a super hero fighting a gang
- knocking out a flock.
- In every place i go i dreamed to be that cool mc
- but people kept on teasing me
- taunt having fun ''go learn the ABC''
- you're shit is whack, you're fag you're mock, rap talent you lack, rapping like
- A COCK
- now ma mind is stocked by negative thoughts dam it's locked
- But I'll complete ma dream till i reach the extreme
- always have a dream and go on, never stop, go to top,
- say okay i'm the best, i can do that never quit
DEFENDER'S RAP
- when i attack/ its like i,m packing a mac/or packing a casket of the
- wac bastards of rap/i,v got my masters at that/i mastered the craft/verbal attack
- your a gerbil a rat/i put the top down/ on the convertible lack/get served like a snack ..
- check it
- but i,m steady fighting the stress/its like a knife in the flesh/right in the chest
- goodnight then u rest/then u sleep in the depth/sleep on me u wake up to death
- then your fighting for breath/i,m write,in the best/this life is a test/i,m describing
- u,r set/a bunch of bitches and u pussy,s are wet/i,m take,in off like i booked me a jet
- i know it makes u upset.
- take a look in my mind/ and wine an wine
- because u,r lines are not like mine/u can not stop my shine/
- my hustle my grind/i,l react in time and snap u,r spine/
- but never mind/its cleaver time,u,r sweeter then a clementine/
- or lemon lime