Battles  PrayThruUrDreams vs UnAuthorised

RULES

This piece is about my dysfunctional family. Rules are just write something from the heart about someone else.

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Can't you see that we're falling apart
  • A band apart
  • We supposed to come together no matter what
  • Or who we are
  • Commute, come together as a union
  • Like a family reunion but
  • Besides that how you going to go do what you do
  • What you did; just to say
  • What you saying
  • Throw at us, hate in tantrums
  • Saying you love us
  • Its sad because when we
  • Was young you taught us not to fight
  • Wars with guns now my lungs is battling
  • Dutch smoke w/ endo, blissful for the moment
  • Remincing while im with the crew but thinking,
  • Bout you ...
  • Thinking about the family,
  • And trying to express my mentality,
  • But its like rationality doesn't exist,
  • Flip the script;
  • We've been through too much shit
  • To up and quit... You can't blame others,
  • For your life when you live on;
  • You got to live it up go out and get it,
  • Serve it up and dish it out...
  • Philosophy don't come with results
  • When you playing victim, throwing complaints or insults
  • Asking for respect to go stab us in the back ...
  • You at a whole other state of mind now
  • But wheres your mind at?
  • You coming at shit from the wrong angle,
  • Not knowing that
  • Its not heart that you lack
  • I know that as a fact...
  • Because you haven't gone and quit yet,
  • So why lose yourself now?
  • Just to say and do shit you'll
  • Regret?
  • Its nonsense,
  • Its obvious but you don't see it ...
  • Won't believe it.
  • There ain't no sense
  • In going out
  • And beating yourself down
  • You gotta build yourself up
  • Lifes not about not giving a fuck or luck
  • The moral of it all is about never giving up straight up
  • Trust ...
  • A band apart
  • Can't you see what's going on?

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • in this nest where i lived, we all lived in this nest with a crown
  • happy and jolly, express it by singin, a resonating sound
  • but one day, when the adult left away, the beautiful nest fell down
  • thesse untrained birds, never learned to fly, they where trapped on the ground
  • shouting and screaming, grieving searching for reason but none was found
  • just an unstable gale, caused by rage around. at least we younglins where bound
  • days past, and days past, we laid at the shade of the tree, hungry thinking "will this day last"
  • the demolished nest in our eyes, the absence of parents, they left from our lives
  • my brothers they faint as they lie. Who am i to rely On? Where is my strength to unite oN?
  • but magically i believed and found the lord and he made me lighter, and before i Called it a day
  • i stood, and ran and ran a way. The drive the empty tummy the strength was faith,
  • I ran towards the edge of the mountain i faced, i jumped and opened my wings
  • i fell to serene winds grace.

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