Battles  YoungJamesDean vs _Voltaire

RULES

write a song, with a beat, about corruption

Max of 64 lines

THIS BATTLE IS OVER

YoungJamesDean won this battle!

START YOUR OWN BATTLE

Thousands of battles have taken place on RapPad. Why not join the fun?

Start Battle

CHALLENGER'S RAP

Attached media not accessible.

The owner took it down or changed the settings to private.

--:--
  • Intro
  • We're too busy fighting wars overseas to realize what's going on in our own backyard
  • People being shot, up our own boulevard
  • Too worried about who's got the stronger vanguard
  • When last Black Friday, mom's were shot inside Walmart
  •  
  • Verse 1
  • Too corrupt, children being mugged. Women being drugged
  • Dragged home so men can erupt
  • This is supposed to be the land of the great
  • But you can't get married unless you're straight
  • Last week in the mall, ten kids were killed by a grenade
  • We need change, "Home of the Free," now "Land of the Fake"
  • Our minds our plagued
  • Some 12 year old is out there right now being raped
  • And I ain't saying I hate this country, cause I ain't a terrorist
  • But it seems, every three seconds, someone is being blown brainless
  •  
  • Hook
  • One, two, three, killing spree
  • One, two, three, lsd
  • Masked killer, machete
  • America! Sing with me
  • One, two, three, killing spree
  • One, two, three, land of free
  • Children killed, carefree
  • America! Sing with me
  •  
  • Verse 2
  • We're too busy fighting off Isis
  • too realize America's own crisis
  • Virus' being released by Miami vices
  • Spiraling downward like we opened a sink stopper
  • When last week three kids were murdered by a chopper
  • And I know it ain't proper, to talk about the coppers
  • But I'm tired of them being involved in slaughters
  • They're not all racist, and even if they were,
  • why would you stoop to their level, and kill them without demur
  • So drop the dillenger, you're not the executioner
  • Cause you just might miss, and shoot the messenger
  • America
  •  
  • Hook
  • One, two, three, killing spree
  • One, two, three, lsd
  • Masked killer, machete
  • America! Sing with me
  • One, two, three, killing spree
  • One, two, three, land of free
  • Children killed, carefree
  • America! Sing with me
  •  
  • Outro
  • It's about time we grow up as a nation, and stop fighting
  • That's all I'm hoping to get across in this message I'm writing
  • Then maybe, we'll see the last uprising
  • Amen

DEFENDER'S RAP

Attached media not accessible.

The owner took it down or changed the settings to private.

--:--
  • Background
  •  
  •  
  • yeah-e-yeah, yeah-e-yeah, uh-huh, oh yeah, yeah,
  •  
  •  
  • Chorus
  •  
  •  
  • We salutin', our brothers out there shootin'
  •  
  • dyin for our lives, damn man, the ultimate sacrifice,
  •  
  • we try to act like we've been through the same strife,
  •  
  • but in the end never pay the same price,
  •  
  • give a hell ya to all the guys out on the line. X2
  •  
  •  
  • XERO
  •  
  •  
  • all around this town people left, right, up and down.
  •  
  • so poor they gotta holla to each other every time they make a dollar,
  •  
  • cause help hasnt been around,
  •  
  • since they took the vow to settle down,
  •  
  • and theres nothing darker,
  •  
  • than the soldier in the corner lying starving on the ground,
  •  
  • but he refuses to be a martyr, so he grabs another round,
  •  
  • he wound up in the body count,
  •  
  • we gotta take after his spirit, even if we only get a snippet of it,
  •  
  • then their other partner , oh the people that prospered,
  •  
  • wandered to the town, inbound with nothing but a hazard,
  •  
  • thats why you walk around seein' bodies on the ground,
  •  
  • and the martyr's daughter sees, falls to her knees, hits the ground,
  •  
  • it will be the worst sound, it will eventually resound,
  •  
  • as people come around, they'll gather and be proud,
  •  
  • of men who went and died so we can sleep safe and sound,
  •  
  • scream it loud: chorus
  •  
  •  
  • Chorus
  •  
  •  
  • We salutin', our brothers out there shootin'
  •  
  • dyin for our lives, damn man,
  •  
  • the ultimate sacrifice,
  •  
  • we try to act like we've been through the same strife,
  •  
  • but in the end never pay the same price,
  •  
  • give a hell ya to all the guys out on the line. X2
  •  
  •  
  • Hook
  •  
  •  
  • And if we ever out there, puttin' our lives on the line,
  •  
  • well get a hell ya, man we'll get glorified
  •  
  • what to do in the mean time?
  •  
  • why not jot down a rhyme,
  •  
  • put it in a post and send it home to your wife and kind child,
  •  
  • let em' know that your alright,
  •  
  • man your coming home, alright? lets fight!
  •  
  •  
  • Beemeister
  •  
  •  
  • The truth is.. We don't have guts to do half what they do.
  •  
  • Every day out there is like a voodoo hunting you down.
  •  
  • Wish they could just go back to town see their family again.
  •  
  • Instead they in dense gunfire ready to get pinned.
  •  
  • It's a war for peace, that's how I fantasize it.
  •  
  • Men out there get hypnotized by gunshots and explosions-
  •  
  • Describable motions. Body filled with aggravation,
  •  
  • got their hearts racin.
  •  
  • Someone shoots and kills but it's a sacrifice
  •  
  • Got country leaders pacin.
  •  
  • Cuz they afraid
  •  
  • to show their face around us why can't
  •  
  • countries just discuss.
  •  
  • But the way we have it at least it's sacrifice.
  •  
  • So we can stay in paradise
  •  
  • but it's still got me paralyzed
  •  
  •  
  •  
  • Chorus
  •  
  •  
  • We salutin', our brothers out there shootin'
  •  
  • dyin for our lives, damn man, the ultimate sacrifice,
  •  
  • we try to act like we've been through the same strife,
  •  
  • but in the end never pay the same price,
  •  
  • give a hell ya to all the guys out on the line. X1

Cookin' something up, just wait a sec...