Battles  NoonTan vs _Voltaire

RULES

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • yeah, you may look at me and think imma nice guy,
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  • gettin' your hopes to high, i walk by say, "hi"
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  • you look at me, then you speak, and like a siren
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  • i begin to sing. scream! at the image of lights beaming,
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  • crawl back in, to my dirt floor den,
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  • it's dark inside, wanna take a ride?
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  • imma nightmare, a tempest of rhyme and rhythm, keep on spinnin' em,
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  • sendin' em through your mind your alone in this Mine, and right on time,
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  • i hear you scream for the last time, and know your ass mine.
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  • Asylum, Asylum..
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  • OH MY GOD! i look at todd, he's lyin' in the parking garage,
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  • shot dead, neck broken, still movin'.
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  • he looks up at me begins to speak, 'why oh why, my oh my,
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  • how the hell could you let me die?' ' no more lies, this war is tied,
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  • almost through, is this your definition of evil dude!'
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  • ' no this is, fuckin skiz, should've stayed home, with the wife and your god-damn kids.
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  • now your goin' home dead or not at all, fuck it'
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  • slam his head against the brick wall, his jaw pops off,
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  • have you had enough?! i continue, wakin' up in a different venue.
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  • there's a bucket in the corner, a dark bed, right outside the bars, a dark corridor.
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  • prayin' to god ' why can't i just get shot in my god-damn
  • head?'
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  • Asylum, Asylum..
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  • i'm done! you hear me?!
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  • probaby not over the screamin',
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  • im speedin, on the highway inbetween I-38, and 39.
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  • will i make it out alive? ' fuck no, damn pussycat doll, like the one in my pack, sack,
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  • that im dragin' up, muggin'. top of a building, right by the ledge, down on a knee,
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  • sayin' the pledge, just beggin god please-. motherfucker, have a good slumber,
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  • '*POLICE* stop right there, you damn bitch-ass blunder.'
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  • drop the girl they say, i say 'okay,' then kick her whining ass off to the streets of L.A.
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  • ' fuckin firin' is all i hear, as i rear near the end of my life, gonna bop em', shock em',
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  • backin' right off of the edge screamin',
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  • 'can't catch me faggots!' i yell, as loud as i can,
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  • my ears ring i wake up,
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  • from this motherfucking dream, and start singin'
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  • 'thank you god, i'm just so glad to be alive, breathin!'
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  • the thing that stinks the most, is that im still home,
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  • go open the door to my kingdom, class, phylum,
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  • i hear a loud siren, pause, " What the fuck?!," 'i'm back the god-damn Asylum."
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  • Asylum..

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