Battles NoonTan vs _Voltaire
RULES
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This battle ended in a tie.
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
This rap was deleted.DEFENDER'S RAP
- yeah, you may look at me and think imma nice guy,
- gettin' your hopes to high, i walk by say, "hi"
- you look at me, then you speak, and like a siren
- i begin to sing. scream! at the image of lights beaming,
- crawl back in, to my dirt floor den,
- it's dark inside, wanna take a ride?
- imma nightmare, a tempest of rhyme and rhythm, keep on spinnin' em,
- sendin' em through your mind your alone in this Mine, and right on time,
- i hear you scream for the last time, and know your ass mine.
- Asylum, Asylum..
- OH MY GOD! i look at todd, he's lyin' in the parking garage,
- shot dead, neck broken, still movin'.
- he looks up at me begins to speak, 'why oh why, my oh my,
- how the hell could you let me die?' ' no more lies, this war is tied,
- almost through, is this your definition of evil dude!'
- ' no this is, fuckin skiz, should've stayed home, with the wife and your god-damn kids.
- now your goin' home dead or not at all, fuck it'
- slam his head against the brick wall, his jaw pops off,
- have you had enough?! i continue, wakin' up in a different venue.
- there's a bucket in the corner, a dark bed, right outside the bars, a dark corridor.
- prayin' to god ' why can't i just get shot in my god-damn
- head?'
- Asylum, Asylum..
- i'm done! you hear me?!
- probaby not over the screamin',
- im speedin, on the highway inbetween I-38, and 39.
- will i make it out alive? ' fuck no, damn pussycat doll, like the one in my pack, sack,
- that im dragin' up, muggin'. top of a building, right by the ledge, down on a knee,
- sayin' the pledge, just beggin god please-. motherfucker, have a good slumber,
- '*POLICE* stop right there, you damn bitch-ass blunder.'
- drop the girl they say, i say 'okay,' then kick her whining ass off to the streets of L.A.
- ' fuckin firin' is all i hear, as i rear near the end of my life, gonna bop em', shock em',
- backin' right off of the edge screamin',
- 'can't catch me faggots!' i yell, as loud as i can,
- my ears ring i wake up,
- from this motherfucking dream, and start singin'
- 'thank you god, i'm just so glad to be alive, breathin!'
- the thing that stinks the most, is that im still home,
- go open the door to my kingdom, class, phylum,
- i hear a loud siren, pause, " What the fuck?!," 'i'm back the god-damn Asylum."
- Asylum..