Battles  DamnedKing vs GoldenCarrot

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Just another day, I enjoy my new life, today.
  • I am the ghost without any host.
  • So let's follow the dead white rabbit.
  • He'll lead us into a new habit.
  • I see every one that is wishing upon a star.
  • Let me tell ya' that no one's going far.
  • Indeed, I haven't had a good deed.
  • Stuck here in Dead Man Wonderland.
  • Fuck it, I always ponder this land.
  • Tried to reach the safe haven.
  • Guess I'm still not goin' to Heaven.
  • I am just a soulless man who kills the foulness man.
  • Tell Mother May I am already starting mayhem.
  • I took several wrong turns and now it's going to be a long burn.
  • Fuck it, stuck in Hell, fuck the world, stuck in Dead Man Wonderland.
  • It's the apocalypse and there's no metropolis.
  • So a outcast I'll stay, ready for the forecast, today.
  • It looks like it's gonna be Hell so get ready to run like Hell.
  • You can kill me if you got skill.
  • Still wonder how I'm on this land.
  • We both followed the dead white rabbitjust like Alice but we got no Johnny Depp.
  • We both swallowed the pills just like Alice and took the step.
  • So why are we all in this Hell hole?

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Just 18 bars for me? I'll leave you with obscene scars that bleed,
  • intentionally I'm venomously attacking, stop retracting, I want you blacking out,
  • not backing down, you're slacking like an assless clown wearing a nightgown.
  • While I'm reloading, dial in your voting cause this asshats eroding,
  • I'm only devoting my time because you're lonely floating to my designs.
  • You are what I say, blue and gray cause I taught you disarray,
  • from the way I'm calling you names, shaming, and draining, you're straining,
  • while I'm contemplating what to file you as, an erectile dysfunctional spaz.
  • Trying to be a pedophile, while slapping little boys asses in preschool classes.
  • My homeostasis is a basis for my ostentatious behavior that traces designs,
  • of which that favor me lyrically intertwined to the paper where lines
  • meet rhymes insurmountable to the uncountable times that I rip out spines,
  • pick up nines and sign away a life, and today that'd be your strife.
  • So welcome to afterlife, seldom see, cause only few believe after getting reaped by me.
  • Undead seed that breathes to subliminally subdue everything you need
  • to win against me, cause coincidentally I'm unexpectedly better with variability.
  • My invincibility comes with a twist, it only works if you're getting pissed,
  • that is after you've been dissed so hard that it jars you to see stars, aka my 18 bars.

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