Battles  SimplyNoelle vs dpaint1212

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • Soul in prison. Never been forgiven from the beginning.
  • Born in a world full of sin. Now I know why Jesus wept.
  • Those precious tears tainting his skin.
  • We can't find gold because we settle for tin.
  • Often we lose because we'll do anything to win.
  • We are victims of of the system.Victims of our own greed
  • We can't reap what we sow, if we haven't planted the seed.
  • Redemption is what we need. Then we'll finally be freed.
  • Trapped in a world full of hate.
  • Trapped in world where people love to steal, kill, and rape.
  • Can we save ourselves before its too late.
  • Or we keep destroying our lives until its too late.
  • I got a lot on my plate.A lot of bad memories in my head.
  • There used to be times when i wish i was dead.
  • Had a lot of sleepless nights in my bed.
  • A lot of night I cried until my pillow was soaking wet.
  • But I became strong. Began to move along.
  • Now I'm finding My purpose feeling less worthless.
  • I'm finding my voice no longer am I voiceless.
  • I'm finding my voice to help those who are helpless.

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • yo I'm in a battle with with myself
  • cause every time I do me I go on the shelf
  • knell down cause maybe praying could help
  • grab a cool towel getting to hot to tell
  • everyone around me all they do is yell
  • want to sell my soul back but all I do is dwell
  • worried that when I see god he'll send me right to hell
  • cause when I met Michelle at a motel the cartel
  • made me say farewell
  • to the one true love that I ever met
  • the floor is wet covered in sweat as there coming in
  • smell a threat as I crept hit him in the head
  • shot this dude Ed down now he's in the bed
  • dripping red as he bled pretty sure he's dead
  • saw my girl in the next room but her eyes are dead
  • said lets get out of here than she grabbed the meds
  • wrapped wire around her arm than stuck a needle in
  • started yelling she was staring nothing I could have did
  • od'd that night she was just a kid
  • think about that every night it will never sit right
  • cried so many times now all I do is fight
  • with my mind waiting for my soul to take flight
  • eyes closed now cause my futures no longer bright
  • ever since we lost the war with the drug life
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