Battles  Youngdahmer vs Junglewizard

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This is my 1st rap. I'd appreciate feedback. Rules: Not your typical diss, write something fictional

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • At a young age my mom told me that I thought differently.
  • It wasn't 'til I cut my first throat that I had an epiphany.
  • Looking for something thrilling, wintertime, needed a filler.
  • Something to pass time, so I became a serial killer.
  • It all seemed so familiar as I looked in the mirror.
  • The older I grew, the colder I got, more bitter--bitter or
  • Bittersweet is the taste of my memories of misery.
  • A history of delivering jitters to those around me.
  • Swiftly with my charm, I'd hope they never found me out.
  • So, I'd sweet-talk them, leaving them with a handful of doubt.
  • While I had a special delivery that was well thought out.
  • I'm trying to branch out, but I can't stop popping off at the mouth.

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Butch sits in the bush, on his tush.
  • Hits himself in the cheek until it turns to mush, And blood starts to gush.
  • Onto the mud, he needs to hush. He sees the girl, she's lush.
  • With a man, he makes her blush. This kind of aggravates Butch, he must crush,
  • Butch wants to amputate the man, slush.
  • Butch wants to strangulate the man, a little too much.
  • Butch is insane. He doesn't have a brain.
  • He likes to slit veins, chain them and throw em in front of trains,
  • Like this human, Wayne. I wonder what he'll do to this woman, I think her name is Jane.
  • Jane and Wayne are rich from their campaign, that led them to their reign.
  • They're from Spain, she's a bitch, he's a bane, same bed? Nah, they're vain.
  • It's a shame, but they never gave anyone any pain.
  • So why does Butch want them slain? Well, let's let him explain.
  • Butch starts to tread through the front yard. But he's shot dead by a guard.
  • Wayne and Jane are always ready. Wayne and Jane are wealthy,
  • Wait no, it's Wayne and Chelsea.

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