Battles  Steaks vs chaoticmuchi

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • 3rd generation, Boston-born caucasian
  • Raised past the days of new immigration
  • Escaping huddled masses yearning to breathe free,
  • To a kid coddled: health, wealth, a college degree
  • An Irish-german upper-middle class suburban
  • Academically determined charismatic person
  • Ashkenazi holocaust mid-century burned in
  • My identity despite my mother's conversion
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  • Learned pre-adolescence be thankful for the presents
  • Parents spent their life dedicated to their descendants,
  • Small town townies, bouncing around in A8 Audis
  • Lounging with friends, dosing slow down brownies
  • In a child's paradise, our means never meager
  • We were nuclear living as fucking cookie cutter cleavers
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  • But we were driven, eager, at times overachievers
  • Put aside our misgivings, our few misdemeanors
  • Fast forward toward senior spring in the twenty-teens
  • Clink a couple of drinks thinking its going down the sink
  • Taking caution, cause I got a lot of options
  • Days lost in exhaustion, body filled with toxins
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  • Still young, idealistic, a bit narcissistic
  • Fear of being just another forgotten statistic
  • Had a happy home now I'm drowned in loans,
  • What's life going to be living on my own?
  • Changing the world as I turn the next page
  • A young millennial coming of age

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I'm about to throw,allegoric flow,
  • Picasso astro ,out of this world art flow,
  • like wow,
  • chaotic's astonishing harmonic journey,
  • get an attorney,
  • for I'm about crack the lyrical laws,..they ain't above me,
  • from a pauper to the price ,to the throne from the bins,
  • don't be thinking i had that silver spoon ever since,
  • coz iv been at the brink of existence ,relying on my instincts,
  • but hey i evolved and scored the attainable,
  • cannibal animal rapper growing mandibles,
  • snake spitting venom on that mic growing fangs,
  • learning to constrict the contradictions,
  • and just sqeeze!
  • thus the doom of the goons,
  • and the loons came soon,
  • punchline 1,2 1,2 like a killer at noon,
  • murdering baboons all these rappers in my room,
  • became king of the food chain,
  • so i staked my claim,
  • chaotic muchi, all up in your face like acne,
  • you can't hack me,
  • no one could back me,
  • so i learnt how to back myself,
  • then drop all you rappers sitting on my shelf,
  • a pauper to the prince,
  • hunted to the hunter,
  • now watch me THROW another wanna be down the gutter,
  • FLING!

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