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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Day to day, nothing to keep my anxiety at bay
- Til I realized, Activity, I would Evade
- Saturday til Sunday, til I and the Friars pray
- I would blaze a spliffed jay, so my mind's anger'd decay
- Everyday
- So I tried to change shit in every way
- I realized that was simply a false-takeaway
- See, I realized I never did anything
- my mind brings it'self to the brink
- Everyday
- I still ain't found a way, but I know myself
- and death will stay away, God sends his help
- kinda like an angelic elf, never cares for himself
- I came to find, that, this was my mind,
- So I ran, like a gazelle, a feral-unwind
- never to enjoy another church bell, only
- inducing hellish dismay on replay
- every day
- relish religion's rubbish, one's hate decides his fate
- imagine being self-driven, for no reason, to no end-date
- emotionally dictate, it's moral treason on yourself, mate
- you try and try, to avoid isolation
- but passions' an empty bas-un
- sufferin emtional devastation
- amassed by my causes of self-condemnation
- harassed by my mind, causing the formation
- of the detonation of my frustration
- All I can do is regress into thes,
- lack of consciousness contest
- liquor n' mischievous cana-bes
- strongly attest, to my mental discontent
- All the while, I hope this painful eternity
- I simply dreamt, for if not, where has my life went?
- I incrementally wasted it away,
- wasted, discomforted by dismay
- for this is the last day
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Lifting up to be tossed out,
- A lost cloud crossed out like a word puzzle.
- Haven't heard a nerd chuckle since the first ruffle of a feather.
- Now it's unpredicted weather for the better or the worse.
- holding on to a sufferable curse with unlovable words.
- rubbed with rubble til my stomach grubbles and hurts.
- shovin haters until I'm first off course.
- and i'm still comin with lots more, glocks, swords, boards with locks connected to the floor.
- shocking the core of you bots with the chords of a god mixed with a rot so don't ignore my shot
- because before you can even knock you're gonna see me while you're shoppin through the stores.
- dropping your drawers while I'm moppin you like chores.
- exhausting the chorus. nodding to the enormous crowd that's standin about.
- get up and shout because if you're gonna lose it then lose it now.