Battles CarlCee vs Unopea
RULES
U can use a prewritten verse I used one because you told me to Write an emotional storytelling verse about life struggles
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- all the shit i'm going through in the real life
- made me think of pulling out ma steel knife
- cause I've been living depressedly tranna steal love
- and every time i search in my mind i see fights
- i've... been wondering. almost my whole life
- if anybody truly loves me cause all i hear is lies
- wine been a close friend in so many nights
- going to jail so many times for doing cocaine n drugs
- but i don't give a fuck, what would change in my life if it already sucks!
- enough is enough no more acting like i'm living in a paradise
- the worst nightmare struggles and pain i wonder if i can sill breath i wonder if i'm sill alive
- hook
- #the #sun #will #rise #yaaa #the #sun #will #rise
- #end #of #darkness #end #of #night #end #lies
- yaaa #the #sun #will #rise #the #sun #will #rise
- (#verse 2)
- and all the dreams that i never achieved in my life
- now i'm picking the knife i just had enough..
- i put it to my neck n i see the blood dropping
- i din't stop laughing till i realized it ain't stopping
- i fell on the ground bleedin & coughing.
- and every time i close my eye i see someone digging ma coffin
- my hart was beating as if the door's knocking
- i know i'm outta this life but i was wishing i could login
- i opened my eyes i was on the ground
- i was shocked when i looked around
- the blood was gone i saw a light and i heard a sound " #tonight #i #give #you #a #new #life "
- i touched my neck but no wounds were found
- #the #sun #will #rise #yaaa #the #sun #will #rise
- #end #of #darkness #end #of #night #end #lies
- yaaa #the #sun #will #rise #the #sun #will #rise
DEFENDER'S RAP
- I see a life as a stimulating-journey of emotions and cycle,
- Birth and death repeating in infinite never-ending spirals,
- Filled with religion, beliefs, dieties and curiosity with set-gases,
- Breathing and speaking with random chemical influenced movement,
- Brains filled with mystical juices and melted-metals like vapors,
- Drugs take effects and create alternate visions for outside-neighbours,
- Third eye creates a freedom for multiple dimensions,
- From Hell to Heaven, short entertaiment then death-sentenced,
- A shipwreck of love, sadness and depression, like God's opression,
- Maybe it's a trap or torture for the diety's entertainment,
- Being watched under his/her eye while writing on this pen n' paper,
- Maybe this is a empty cage, let's take a vision on another paradigm,
- Filled with mysterous intrigue, watching as we write a rhyme,
- Influenced by inspirational thoughts by politicans,
- Why do we obey laws by local humans in "higher" positions,
- We're just caged inside a perspective by opinions-sprouted visions,
- Why are we the only planet that has life? Maybe the universe was genocided,
- How many germs we found in the future, oh some, I think we might've just survived.
- Now on the braggardio..
- Gas flow making solid annihilation, a formula of liquid ether,
- Quickened fever for subliminal dissing, ghosted in a reaper,
- For fresh subject Carlton, dancing for this prince, limits cheaper,
- Flipped infinity and rounded the herd for brain-genocide, I hit it deeper
- Spying in this syllabic holocaust, trying to See (Cee) what Carl is creating,
- Red-vesseled eyes stare at enemies, if they're subjects, they're late then,
- I'm like a yellowstone wolf, and Yelawolf with a cold stone heart, mate and,
- Eating you like Eminems, Field marshall with stan-zas of poetic fuel, you hating?
- Transferred through the second dimensions, stabbed in a corner like triangles,
- Spinned in psychic-like contraction, isometric symmetry, spilt in ten angles,
- Breaking celestian gates, to be the universal Floyd Mayweather in worm-holes,
- Speaking of worms, you're going to be eaten in a pit of 'em, you're a noumenon.
- You #emotional-#wreck, get #rekt by #Terminator-rhymes, put in disfigurment,
- You've got #armed #nulls (Arnold) #Swore #this #nigga (Schwarzenegger) dissed me,
- Now you've envoked rage and I'm casketing you in rythmic-rigamortis,
- #Predator-King who has #techniques that are #immortal killing in-a-mortal.