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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- verse 1
- praying at night wailing and sad
- sending letters to god but i guess i'm failing in that
- now i'm #raising #the #hat. facing the fact
- no more hating the #drab now i'm waving ma hand
- drawing the map i'm outta this world #racing #the #blast
- i ain't tailing the trap, i'm turning the act, reversing the task
- years living in pain now i'm cursing the #ankh purging the mask
- no more #flirting the #stag / averting the yak
- i'm feeling like #Messiah when i'm ending the #rack
- #chorus dreams... dead dreams,, it's all .. dead dreams
- dreams dead dreams in ma hart
- ma vein bleeds ma soul tears cause it's all dreams.
- dreams dead dreams
- (verse 2)
- as the life was slaughtering ma dreams
- and ma hart was bleeding tears
- finally met the person that was reshaping ma genes
- that's when life decided to #freeze acting like her soul is the only thing she needs
- now she's gone with the #wind and i'm left
- chasing my dreams while #racing the #breeze
- i'm #tracing the #gleams slaying the #thief
- pages of pain now my #blood been #spraying the #leaf
- in one day i went to my homie's house. stepping by the door. i was hearing a wheeze
- so i hustled by breaking the door the condition was #flaming my knees
- he was covered with blood i sat there crying blaming the tears
- now he's #portraying my sleeps and i'm #replaying the #sheets
- i wish he's resting in peace
- i guess i'll make it so #burning the dreams
- ya i'm #burning #the #dreams
- #chorus ..dreams...........
DEFENDER'S RAP
- // Hook //
- Aggression's got me pent up, it has been tough,
- I'm just tensed up, and enough is enough,
- #Pressure #depressing so much I'm getting #crushed,
- In the end get a #diamond #from #the #rough.
- I hope I get my #diamond #from #the #rough.
- // Verse //
- Everyday another seance living in this chaos,
- I got Satan in my basement and he's always stating "pay up".
- Everyday the same old grind bust my ass from five to nine,
- 'Though I'm searching cannot find any way to keep my mind.
- Storm's not ceding nor winds leaving, broken home not completing,
- Solemn spirits, soul depleting keep it strong & take the beating.
- Everyday and every night, over stressed not feeling right,
- Always restless and uptight and want to fight with all in sight.
- Someone's sorrowed, someone's blue, thoughts are scattered and askew,
- Can't construe what I should do, endless loop of déjà vu.
- Everyday I'm pleading, please don't seem seething and mean,
- Perceived for over-achieving, but have low self-esteem,
- When I demonically scream, 'cause I'm stressed at the seams.
- Hakuna Matata's believed, I repeat it like creed,
- I won't concede to this grief, deep beneath impeding streams,
- I want relief to be redeemed, and achieve these fleeting dreams.
- // Hook //
- Aggression's got me pent up, it has been tough,
- I'm just tensed up, and enough is enough,
- #Pressure #depressing so much I'm getting #crushed,
- In the end get a #diamond #from #the #rough.
- I hope I get my #diamond #from #the #rough.