Battles  PhantomInTheShadow vs WriterMoak

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no dissin,but use your emotions.feel what you write

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • life is just a bunch of twisted games starin inside
  • of darkness goin insane what with this shit feel
  • like bein kicked in the dick repeatedly godspeed
  • might not even he enough for me but hey what
  • can i do besides live it even though the ness
  • ary requirements im still alive and may be defeated
  • but ill admit it im not go say im invincible im
  • human and no matter what this world is still
  • despicable dying from breathing in too much
  • bullshit spoken for the mouth of full clips damn
  • what's wrong am i speaking to much well what
  • did you expect my touch makes shit bust and
  • confesse there own lives because it there own
  • lives preaching using there own ryhmes dine
  • and wine takes to much time id rather sit in a
  • seat all the time with a pen and pad to get this
  • unforgettable world off my own fuckng mind
  • but if i died today who would fucking cry

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Yeah, i was with this girl for 6 months;
  • when i was with her, it was hard to think of a respnse;
  • she was everything that i ever wanted;
  • and now, im left broken hearted;
  • Just last week shit went down hill;
  • you left me saying 'we could be friends still;
  • after 6 months you lost all feelings?
  • My heart had ard time taking that beating
  • love is cruel love is evil;
  • love is far from being simple
  • you said we could be friends but we aint;
  • you wont even talk to me, what are you a saint?
  • I apolgized a million times,
  • i wrote you a thousand rhymes;
  • Love can be harsh but in can be sweet
  • love can be a lovely treat
  • breakups hurt more when you think Thyre the one;
  • but everything changes when you get the text saying, 'Im done...'

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