Battles Miss6pain vs Noun98
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- grew up so damaged,
- daddy sitting staring at my mummy,
- don't cry its a ride or die,
- mum you can do it, it's a long time coming,
- don't let him do it, you're not on your own!
- I'm going in but I hear the phone, your gold ring shone
- and she was thrown,
- it's a end to a marriage, please be in a safe zone, this aint
- a payphone, temporary use, she's been abused,
- watched her cry cus it's a ride or die.
- Still so damaged, day by day she's becoming saddened,
- I hear her crying she's a woman of a strength
- that no man could take!
- Look in the mirror, seems opaque,
- she gave a hundred dollars like it's gambling game!
- Hid every little pain,please live ,
- you've got paradise under your feet,
- tell him to stop being vulgar,
- you deserve more than a smashed bottle of vodka,
- a woman of such a great strength,
- like she's a part of the commonwealth!
- Stress, it's not to impress,
- one day she might fight,
- for a freedom,give him a reason.
- it's not a war,
- it's more, it's a game with no mistakes,
- you win,you take,you lose,time to improve.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- yeah she sat next to me in class during the exams
- single it out,our friendship hit 8.5 on the histogram
- kind women with a quiet personality and a bright smile are hard to find
- diamond eyes sparkled my heart and the nerves related on my mind
- beautiful as a sky in the night with an average lips
- thinking if i could just get her attention will that benefit
- we settle in secretly,but her eyes were on me like a hunted prey
- our love is what i see in my dreams with a sea that's always grey
- her friends wont back off like bees with out honey on a bad day
- cheered me up like Obama to the people screaming yes we can
- she probably hated when i became sad and the love story began
- Walked her home everyday after school and tried not to spew out our shyness
- yeah i had it in me again i thought i left it in 2nd grade but didnt challenge her righteousness
- even though she had her brother i had mined but it wasn't a problem to me and her
- wrote her a poem that actually took our relationship to the next level cause that's what i prefer
- started seeing that our secret love was leaking to the point my niggas almost fell in love with her
- you always get where one friend likes you but your in it with someone else
- that was me with my girl and her friend liked me too but not interested in her circumflex
- masterminded into bringing a dead end to ''us'' to see us end with bad ending
- started seeing her different side that was offending
- later our love was increasingly bending
- to a certain state that our trust and faith was descending
- wheew down goes ''us'' in the break-up drain
- tired of her not speaking and ignoring me again
- she wasn't the same girl i fell in love with
- i guess we weren't a happy couple blending within bliss
- ask her what the problem is she answered me with a walk away
- surely i was surprised and hurt in a disrespectful way
- last day i wrote a message that couldn't revive our love
- what a road i went through well that was really tough
- yeah that's "WHEN I LOVED H.E.R"