Battles JSlick vs ghostsurf
RULES
Write about how some thing you love consumed you.
Max of 32 lines
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- It's like every thing I want is in a big bubble
- and I'm stuck on the outside, bare nuckles
- bruised up from the friction of the wall rubble
- that used to divide our troubles.
- //
- But it's all out in the open now
- Can't even take a shit without thinkin about
- these broken vows and broken promises feel
- like I'm broken now, but it's you thats not fixable
- Past like a haunting howl.
- //
- And it's daunting how, so many memories can
- vanish over night.
- Fuck puttin up a fight, you put up a wall.
- Leave me outside, it's to cold to cry,
- All I know is nothing.
- //
- It's gettin harder every night but
- easier to let my emotions fly, off the
- hook, you wanted an open book? Tears flowin
- like clock-work, but you mistake me for a jerk?
- //
- I just redirect whats on my mind,
- Emotions bottled up, explosion time,
- Like some one gave me a shake from behind.
- But you just go straight to hide.
- //
- And when I try to dive in, I'm just blinded
- by, the murky water that resides on your mind.
- Lost cry in the distance, I subside, as
- you pull my under and watch me die.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Write anything here to generate some fresh lines
- But you know women lieits like i sent my love with a text two times
- While you were playing playstation, my pencil was erasing lines
- But you know women lieits like i sent my love with a text two times
- Hypnotic got me going idiotic but i blow up like atmoic, read these rhymes
- Opera man, you must be a phantom, 'cause i can't find any talent in your lines.
- Slap a label on it, be embalmed on it, pharaoh of slick rhymes and bad times
- He rose high up in the sky, i gave the advise to hold back on the rhymes
- I’m a pretty dark person, i've though about ending it a million times
- Im in my own division, you cant dodge this collision, my mind and rhymes
- I’m a pretty dark person, i’ve though about ending it a million times
- Some people are just too hard to diss. i tried, but i don't think my first two lines
- The extreme daily routines suddenly became a movie on a screen, i watched to many times,