Battles  Ladyrhetoric vs Pi

RULES

True story of difficult times / story-telling, no direct attacks.

Max of 18 lines

THIS BATTLE IS OVER

Ladyrhetoric won this battle!

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Battle on January 21 2014 and Battle on January 22 2014

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • The shadow man lingers in the corner;
  • He's a black cloud with no feet, doesn't speak.
  • No face, but has a twisted smile with sharp teeth.
  • I hear static in my brain, this shit's getting harder
  • to pretend I'm not insane. So, I start to barter.
  • I scream "What do you want? Leave me alone!"
  • My true colors have been shown to the unknown.
  • I feel so alone as I rock back and forth, these voices drone
  • On and on. Leaving me no option but to get stoned.
  • Thought things were finally going well, coming into my own.
  • But I've been dethroned; thrown into a frigid zone.
  • Then you question why I'm so goddamn cold.
  • Another joint needs to be rolled, as these feelings unfold
  • Coming at me twofold; My mind is being controlled.
  • My thoughts are getting hard to withhold--
  • And I'm terrified that I'm going to start doing as I'm told.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I don't even need to read your rap to write mines
  • cause in my right mind I can insert tight lines
  • I lost some battles cause sometimes I didn't have enough rhymes
  • Step up to the plate wait, I shitted on it called that lunchtime.
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  • Taste scrumptious, its Ramen
  • Rhymin' mythical mystical
  • Lyrical cynical over the syllables pinnacle
  • 8 lines gave you an infection
  • PI the ultimate perfection

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