Battles UNYEN vs WhitePlague
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This isn't a traditional battle. It's kinda like a workshop battle. we'll take two good pieces and see what ya'll think.
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I was supposed to be the flawless coder
- the motor less rotor
- to break the mold with brick and mortar
- and toss it out like it was a Motorola
- I spit coca-cola
- you all stay stiff from Rigamortis
- stay cold like winter solstice
- Better take a notice, you can take solace
- in these soulless, hopeless, flawless, callus, dusty Dallas
- dirt palace and I'll remain the hostess.
- Hostess;
- the host that raises the bonus while staying focused
- and slaying his bogus,ferocious,opponents
- that swallow his baby Jonas
- rhymes like his name was Cronus
- leech em' like a wood tick
- when they go sick
- during the growing season
- sicker then that sinful-heathen
- struggling just to keep breathing
- While ya'll stay seeking
- for higher learning,yearning,
- burning, churning
- out the raps like it was a burden
- when it goes to crap
- you call it a wrap
- and close the curtain
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Welcome to America:
- Where the residents vote for negligent presidents
- That put us through recessions and we end up regrettin' it
- and don't even press to resettin' it,
- 'Cause if we did, politicians would spend our checks second-guessin' it.
- So instead we stick our necks in it
- and pay taxes till we're in debt and immigrants can get the best of it;
- And we're stuck with the rest of it.
- school, business and medicine
- It's our own fuckin' country and they won't even let us in.
- We live in a country where what they cook in the prisons has more nutrition
- than what our schools cook in their kitchens
- No I'm not bitchin', just depictin' a vivid vision with livid precision
- so that maybe the kid'll give it a listen
- and realize that
- It's time we all stand to our feet against the man in his seat.
- Just remember that until we fuckin' stand we are weak.
- It's funny how we gather in a tower or steeple to talk about all these evils
- then watch through our little peepholes
- Instead of claiming what's ours. What the fuck happened to the power of the people?
- This society was built for upper class.
- So get up off your ass and raise your glass
- as I toast to a fucking nation that we should already have.
- It's amazing how we don't care about our country's evolution
- Pollution or our state of destitution
- How our political figures belong in an institution.
- and how easily we could bring the resolution
- with a single revolution.