Battles  Dogman vs HusainMCLawrence

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • They never knew how it felt all this pain
  • inside my body im sorry if im conceited but
  • never will I be sorry forever still will I worry
  • cause in my mind you were there for me ,
  • and I know this is sudden but its supposed
  • to be you were always hard to get around
  • with never hard to reach always so
  • mysterious with strange possibilities I only
  • knew the jist the only thing you would
  • but u should know how it felt all this pain
  • that befell me
  • And its sad to say
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  • If I love u now will I forget .if I remember
  • will I gain some pride .blonde by your
  • beauty is it safe to open my or will
  • I die despite this pain ill never cry
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  • When I talk my voice returns so lonely
  • if only this cold world didn't own me my
  • lungs leak I cant speak my throat is closing
  • i cant breath if yhis is how it feels Im in
  • need someone please save me im dying
  • from this heart attack feelings are catching
  • me and no-one wants to take this is the
  • essence the history of my despair the main
  • reason why my futures filled with stormy
  • glares

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