Battles  Trevor vs JoeytheSaint

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Forever stuck in hip hop I'll walk this road till my hip pops,
  • It's a hard pill to swallow when it feels like you've sipped rocks,
  • Entangled in a thick knot wish God would guide me past the
  • streets that criss cross, Guess the jokes on me but I see no chris rock,
  • Grew up without a father figure I miss my pops till I think it over
  • and I think not, I find more comfort when writing these ink blots
  • out comes a story with no distinct plot, I walk as a lonely ghost
  • down these roads to a place I don't call home just to sleep on a
  • pillow and curl up on a bed like an armadillow dead, Get up the next
  • day and do it all over again, My clothes look like a mess my job only
  • pays in cents than two weeks later getting that pathetic check guess
  • I wasn't meant for success it sends me over the edge as I sit here an
  • loath depressed, With all visions envisioned thought by now I would've
  • arisened, But I'm no Jesus Christ just a genius that writes inside demons
  • they fight slowly they take my remaining piece of might now all's I got left
  • to do is spread my peace on this mic till the weight I carry crushes me to
  • pieces by night, I swear my life's a hill, cause it only steepens in height,
  • Unobtainable goals I'm reachin for like I'm a treadmill running for
  • that donut on a string my breathing gets tight weezing is the price
  • for fame its no easy right, So why am I seeking this life? Look at me,
  • I'm speaking in rhyme, This games bleeding me of sight, Cause I only
  • see me becoming the best to pick up a pen, I sit in a den sifting through my
  • ideas as this verse extends trying to get every person impressed while my
  • life worsens instead, You ask if this a daily occurance? The anwser is yes

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • I'm a prodigy, I'm a prophet see,
  • I'm holy like the seven seas
  • American born, my parents weren't
  • Important I make their long trip worth
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  • See I'm in school b' but hard for me, to get any grade above a C
  • I was hood born, I'm a genius born, I'm Edison with brown skin though
  • "Educate yourself," my momma torn, college dropout hold the phone
  • Hold a candle, no cologne, dropped from classes, who would've known
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  • I want to tell my people no, I want my music to kill a throne
  • What's important? My "State of Know"
  • My State of being, no average Joe
  • I can't be dumb now, enough with them clowns
  • My people need teach, no student dumb now
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  • I pray we all live, I pray we all learn
  • I pray I ain't weak, I pray he saves me
  • My biggest fear now is being victim
  • Of old school teachings and racist systems
  • My skin is brown, my styles cholo,
  • if I ain't smart now, they kill me for sure
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  • See I'm a new breed, product of crossings
  • I'm son of ET, the factors watch me
  • My fate is fatal, LA to SD
  • 4 years of college, but then they kicked me
  • And that shit kicked me, I need that knowledge
  • Cuz thats the power, cuz that's the ending
  • The more brown degrees, the more respect see
  • No guns in backpack, just books about peace
  • I swear I love it, the books that I read
  • There's justice somewhere, there's heart in a fiend
  • What's meaningful? give meaning to fools
  • Give browns a background, give browns a chance now.

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