Battles  Suddenlydope vs

RULES

Song format,, few verses maybe a chorus ?

Max of 30 lines

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Battle on February 5 2014

CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • {verse 1}
  • I can control my own when im on the dro
  • this shit, is made from home. E.T is even trying to phone my home looking
  • to get stoned honeycombed bong keep me calm re-spawn from the dead,
  • mr ripper at your service close the curtains you bitch are about to be hurtin
  • this is certain, jacks the surgeon, reciting resurfaced
  • jack draws his claws to your jaws extract flaws ,gimme an applause , wiping applesauce across
  • hoping to break jaws. im just certain I keep my rhymes flirting
  • with this pussy its squirting. inserting curses stealing purses
  • merges hardworking verses. versus persons making you feel
  • burdens sacrificing virgins in churches I have to stop these urges
  • trying to start beef, mght as well be a war, just sick of your poor scores
  • bitches adore dropping my drawers got their mouths stuck,
  • from sucking my dick AHH FUCK.
  • [chorus} :
  • With a simple dope beat im bringing heat and I don't cheat
  • its all from the ill mind inside, just come along for the ride, c'mon im just gunna glide.
  • Verse 2:
  • In the rap game im naked flow so wicked ill be waking up with
  • 8-9 digits in my bank account. I cant account for all the vicious midgets
  • I served like biscuits , didn't need any assistance it was just business
  • im going to make you feel nonexistent cuz my flows just so consistent
  • and you be living in a twisted village doing the thunder dance with no
  • underpants you get cramps like bitches on the rag, must mean your a fag
  • transgender ill be your immediate offender im endangering a fucked up
  • gender because I just got a mean temper. getting head from a girl that needs
  • dentures holy fuck. what an adventure.
  • {Chorus}:
  • With a simple dope beat im bringing heat and I don't cheat,
  • its all from the ill mind inside, wow what a ride besides, who the fuck wants to glide?

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • Chorus: Stranger girl, don't smile at me, don't pull me in and throw me away
  • Stranger girl, don't wink at me, for us to be together there's no way
  • You're here today but you'll be gone tomorrow, separated by land and time
  • There'll be a minute of joy for a life of sorrow, don't smile at me, good bye
  • V1: It started with a smile, I smiled back
  • Got her number, she didn't text me or call back
  • I guess she was nervous I mean nobody's perfect
  • But after we got closer I thought I was deserving of a better look
  • man did I get that, I could write a book on the love in her eyes with no setbacks
  • Shook when I saw her had to catch my breath back
  • When I stood with her all night despite being jet lagged
  • But then came a day when we had to depart, said we'll miss each other
  • keep us fresh in our hearts, I thought that we could keep in touch but it wasn't gonna happen though
  • I guess she couldn't answer cause I can't call international
  • She was my dream girl turned nightmare
  • Cause of all my white hair, life doesn't fight fair
  • Now I wish that I could take my memory and just erase her
  • I guess my mama was right, never fuck with strangers.
  • V2: Maybe she's chilling with rich kids and I can't compete
  • Even if I blow up and get known my shit is free
  • My music is my soul, can't sell it to someone else
  • Maybe with this mindset I've already fucked myself
  • I don't know what to do, fuck this predicament
  • and fuck all these sticky situations that I'm getting in
  • Maybe if I keep it up I'll get into this shit again
  • Maybe I should quit being romantic and just stick it in
  • But nah, I can't do that, I'm not that type of man
  • I'd rather have her put a ring on and hold her hand
  • but now, I'd rather have my soul die
  • So if Kappa's not smiling back, you know why

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