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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I'm just the product of a fucked up society,
  • if in God we trust is in the pledge then why the fuck does my government lie to me?
  • I never gave them my permission to spy on me or to invade my privacy,
  • all thanks to some sadistic terrorists playing hide-and-seek.
  • The world is a fucked up place, present and the past.
  • Unarmed teens getting murdered, how much longer can that shit last?
  • Executions of innocents getting recorded and spread on Twitter to "prove a point",
  • please explain to me what kind of god would ever approve of that?
  • We're in this ISIS crisis, why won't we use one of our drone devices
  • and blow those mothafuckas up without the bat of an eyelid.
  • I know violence shouldn't be the answer,
  • but we gotta do something to stop the spread of this cancer.
  • White privilege is real and it's fucking sick,
  • never once have I been stopped and questioned about shit.
  • I mean really tho what is the fucking difference?
  • Why do people even care what the color of someone else's skin is?
  • I know the world's been fucked from the beginning,
  • why can't we all band together to ensure a better ending?
  • The media promotes drug culture and then comes down on the users like vultures,
  • they feed teens their deaths and then feast on their leftovers.
  • Nowadays hardly anyone ever chooses to stay sober,
  • you have to learn to adapt to be accepted as you get older.
  • I've seen too many members of my family and friends fuck their life up over alcohol and weed,
  • they stopped giving a shit about their dreams to succeed and succumbed to the highs and the greed.
  • I'm not saying I have a problem with smoking or drinking,
  • I just think it's fucked up how the media is so deceiving.

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • When I vent through the mic it's like a release that holds me tight,
  • my heart rolls over and stops because of the cold I feel at night,
  • another nigga gunned down by policemen they can't get right,
  • so slick of feelin empty because the empty feeling is no fight,
  • but it's like the world got turned upside down inside out,
  • and geography don't help cuz it fucked up even GPS can't give me a route,
  • off beat to paint pictures abstract to grow knowledge hoping that yo brain sprouts,
  • but this won't sell so back to the topic of enlightening minds without doubts that
  • Malcolm X, Huey Newton, i am return of revolution,
  • If you really want an answer, I got a gun solution,
  • but they riot in the streets they killin niggas execution,
  • i'm tryna stay sane while they making my people bleed,
  • that's why I have no hesitation to my roll my weed,
  • my mind just so happens to be the keys,
  • unlocking doors walking threw cuz I'm mentally free,
  • understanding leading people is my destiny,
  • but I'm lost in translation like it's English and Portuguese,
  • with one ear to listen, but they talking on both sides of me
  • like how you love women but preform misogyny
  • you the same niggas that seem to keep disappointing me,
  • like make a change from the hurt that keeps on giving,
  • it seems like yall niggas suffocate cuz yall keep repeating,
  • that why inhale to exhale knowledge just to keep breathin

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