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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- one was not without the other
- two lost souls been away from sleep n slumber
- weeping mothers call for brighter kids like lightning thunder
- rain an snow make sleet for some but its what others don't
- know i guess it hurts for most when its cold inside ya home
- so go an get a coat an put some socks around your toes
- it's cozy when you're on your own all alone with thoughts to rack the dome
- el dorado flow is goin silver chrome platinum gold its so full a soul
- its full of hope or shit but this bull is pissed i'm a taurus kid
- i'm stubborn, arrogant angry ignorant wasted lazy
- sayin these statements make me impatient while i'm boilin hatred
- the mind is here but the brain is vacant
- takin swings like this lanky kid awaitin greatness its so amazing
- cypher practice target aiming at the rate i'm swayin
- no sense is bakin made to make ya hate me wait it ain't over lately
- doses potent acid spinal chord is shaking
- broken speakin about what i've spoken the monster awoken
- this word in poem posed to over throw the throne with emotion
- losin heart but that don't mean shit cause i been losin from the start
- i can't even see the finish line but i still charge with electric bars
- pathetic farce a liar at that i'm better than lions or cats the mind is adapt
- adept a peripatetic a welp who wept oh well whats next the plane or realm
- this lifes a dream i'm tryna be awake or just asleep so close my eyes please
- an let me rest in peace at least before this beast takes control of me
- i'm rappin uncontrollably a rose could cut my throat an make me bleed
- my lines are stupid cause i abuse the music with all kinds a uses
- too bad i'm feelin like i'm useless but i try not to prove it so profusely i just do it
- not that i am ruthless not denyin movement
- but this sewer mutant spewing mucus juices over institution students
- sickly spittin misty on this sick beat for fun like playin frisbee
DEFENDER'S RAP
- want to get down and get a track out,
- but theres so many set backs,
- trying to take a step forward but keep taking step backs,
- looks like im getting held back,
- used to get told i spit wack, spit wack,
- imagine that, anything beautiful,
- i damage that, i damage that i really do damage that,
- now imagine that, sometimes man feels so deep, man cant get his words out,
- so i cant speak, so i write whats in my mind and find a beat,
- let my mind unwind, staying up late mans over thinking,
- so the next day looks like man was grinding,
- for my music loves what i want to be finding,
- but it seems never to get noticed,
- and i dont know if man noticed certain man will say there your closest mate,
- but looks like the whole time they were lying,
- man could be dying and man still wouldnt hear a word from them,
- man could be dying, occurs they want something then man hears a word from them,
- what gets me, certain man can have fuck all but still would be trying to give,
- then certain man has everything but wont give fuck all,
- thats crazy, thats fucked up
- but thats the world we live in,
- thats why its got man stressin,
- same time i still count everyday as a blessing,
- cause there will always be someone in a worst place than i am,
- the guy on this track i am him, that is me, realtoddc , just releasing stress, dun kno snm