Battles DonaldJeremy vs Tew-SLy
RULES
No rules , unless sounding perfect to the ears and mind
Max of 18 lines
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Tew-SLy won this battle!
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Late night in the 404, fog rolling thick on the concrete floor
- Shadows in the rear view, creeping slow through the county door
- You talk big numbers till the room go silent, empty space
- I turn dark thoughts into silver plaques, you just waste space
- Heavy is the crown when the bassline knock, heart cold like ice
- Rolled the dice twice, paid the price twice, bought the same vice
- Melodic with the cadence, but the pen still lethal, cut precise
- You chasing clout on the web, I’m chasing legacy in real life
- Clock strikes two, red lights flashing through the tinted glass
- Whispers in the reverb, watching every ghost from my past
- You step up to the mic, but your bars lack soul, fake prestige
- Fulton County cold, got the whole game under siege
- Smoke rising slow while the minor key rings in the dark
- Built this nostalgia wave from scratch, lit the whole spark
- Phantom in the booth, turning real pain into melody
- You fighting for a moment, I'm writing down a whole legacy
- Beat drops heavy, room temperature drop to zero below
- Step back, check the scoreboard—you already know.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- //Verse 1
- Look- scratchin' out the page, another line I gotta mutilate,
- Blinked and watched the calendar accelerate and mutate,
- Staring at the wall for three whole days, I'm in a catatone,
- The world done changed so fast, I'm like a rotary in a cellular zone
- Brain fog, thick smog, drownin' in the ink reservoir,
- Tryin' to pull a classic out a head that's full of heavy tar
- I'm Schrodinger's rapper, dog I'm dead and alive in this box
- Hold up, let me break that down: I mean I'm trappin' myself in my own head,
- Competely stuck, but the minute you open the track, I'm killin' it, look,
- Real life hittin' hard, look at the grocery bill, we stuck
- Landlord knockin' on the door, another budget item stuck,
- Young MCs losin' their minds just tryin' to get a buck,
- We screamin' at the sky like why the hell is the transmission stuck
- Hard crampin', lamp burnin' midnight to the sunrise,
- Fog Vs. Pen, pure tug-of-war, let's see who's gonna bleed first
- But I bleed on the sheet to make the syllables matter!