Battles  Diamond_shine_2-O vs LovesEminem

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  • This is a freestyle

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • what is it that you want?
  • you really think you're smart?
  • okay. then let me show you how that goes,
  • you can't get all those punchlines hoe.
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  • he's blinded by pride, trying to climb on the ride,
  • but his rhymes are denied, leaving him dying inside.
  • he thinks he’s a king on the throne, speaking a syllable zone,
  • but he's a gimmick alone, biting a pitying bone.
  • you can't even match a sentence or scratch a simplex,
  • i cancel your plan, detach you and shatter your text.
  • a clown with a crown, drowning in sounds of a ghost,
  • i bound you to ground, pounding your proud little boast.
  • a gas in the crowd isn't allowed but you're quickly exposed.
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  • you walk in the room, acting like you own the place,
  • but everybody sees the panic on your face.
  • you think you’re the best? Man, you're a joke at best,
  • choking under pressure, breathing heavy in your chest.
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  • you can't even rhyme, look how your hands shake,
  • your whole persona is a goddamn bad fake.
  • you rehearsed in the mirror, thought you had it down,
  • now you’re silent on the mic, a silent clown in this town.
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  • look at him, he’s frozen, he’s out of time,
  • somebody give this little boy a nursery rhyme!
  • for me its lunchtime so i'll stop fighting.
  • and for you... you should start a better writing.

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