Battles Diamond_shine_2-O vs LovesEminem
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- This is a freestyle
DEFENDER'S RAP
- what is it that you want?
- you really think you're smart?
- okay. then let me show you how that goes,
- you can't get all those punchlines hoe.
- he's blinded by pride, trying to climb on the ride,
- but his rhymes are denied, leaving him dying inside.
- he thinks he’s a king on the throne, speaking a syllable zone,
- but he's a gimmick alone, biting a pitying bone.
- you can't even match a sentence or scratch a simplex,
- i cancel your plan, detach you and shatter your text.
- a clown with a crown, drowning in sounds of a ghost,
- i bound you to ground, pounding your proud little boast.
- a gas in the crowd isn't allowed but you're quickly exposed.
- you walk in the room, acting like you own the place,
- but everybody sees the panic on your face.
- you think you’re the best? Man, you're a joke at best,
- choking under pressure, breathing heavy in your chest.
- you can't even rhyme, look how your hands shake,
- your whole persona is a goddamn bad fake.
- you rehearsed in the mirror, thought you had it down,
- now you’re silent on the mic, a silent clown in this town.
- look at him, he’s frozen, he’s out of time,
- somebody give this little boy a nursery rhyme!
- for me its lunchtime so i'll stop fighting.
- and for you... you should start a better writing.