Battles Jonahh vs NarcoBG
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- watchmaker precision in a world of digital approximation
- every gear tooth catching the next bars serration
- call it huygens the way i built the pendulum for accuracys foundation
- and i built the verse on the same principle, same patient dedication
- the voynich manuscript of rap, scholars spending careers
- decoding what I wrote in passing what appears
- deceptively surface level opens corridors that clears
- every precedent established by the pioneers
- im talleyrand, like i survived napoleon, the revolution, every administrations
- shifting allegiance I move through every generations
- definition of the culture without seeking their validations
- the chameleon who never lost his original colorations
- hannibal crossed the alps in winter on a route
- nobody cartographed as viable, the devout
- believers in the impossible become the devout
- witnesses when the elephants emerge from the drought
- like my lingual concept is a silk road, seventeen commodities
- moving simultaneously through the bar, the oddities
- of spice and silk and gunpowder, the commodities
- of language traded at unprecedented velocities
- the oppositions building walls im undermining at the base
- vauban siege methodology, I dont attack the face
- of the fortress, I redirect the water, shift the space
- beneath the foundation until the structure leaves no trace
- spent the whole first stanza engineering the approach
- the second setting traps beneath the surface of the coach
- work, the ornamental bars concealing what'll encroach
- on everything you thought was solid thats the poach
- these rappers move in straight lines, predictable and cardinal
- im moving through the verse like eulers paths and its marginal
- efficiency is not the goal, the tours the ordinal
- achievement, every bridge crossed once, nothing nominal
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Tacky
- You man is Tacky
- Tacky
- Serious
- tracksuit on, bally on, bring the ching to make man extinct, mastodon
- long arm of the law don't reach like arachnid, so they can't catch me
- too flashy, too fast see, my money reach like babylon, but with one builder
- there won't be mass confusion bout my money, you either get some or you don't
- you get jam, or jammed with the chrome, banged, banged to the bone
- bad, i look bad to the bone, you act like it, you a soft imitation,
- problem, thats with its limitations, it comes to goats
- eliminated from conversation, stand to attention, back to your station
- mediocre, its innate for you, greatness is charades for me, im a player
- yeah, my skin dark like vader, the gyaldem like that chocolate
- they like their shit jamaican plantation, fresh out the plastic-
- -Coats, straight outta brassic-
- -shows, you man are way too-
- -old fi this, don't chat back to me, your back might ache
- if your back done ache, ima snap it, make sure your back done break
- Serious,