Battles  SageFS vs JuicyJobaJaba

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NO AI, Just be as lyrical as possible FROM UR OWN MF MIND

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I’m jittery, wickedly witty, a kid with a sickness for rhythm,
  • spittin ridiculous images stitched into syllable prisons,
  • innocent grin with a sinister twist in the sentence I’m givin,
  • comic relief till the punchline is suddenly hittin your vision.
  • Restless with pressure, I’m readin the room with suspicion,
  • brittle egos get bent when I pivot the angle I’m spittin,
  • I clip-pin consonant clusters to blister the rhythm I’m given,
  • turnin a joke into judgment with split-second precision
  • Hungry for meaning, I’m diggin through myths and conditions,
  • paint vivid pictures with verbs that evade supervision,
  • quiet till chaos erupts from the coil of my diction,
  • they laugh at the setup, then freeze when it clicks in position.
  • Unstable but focused, I walk the division between ‘em,
  • truth in the humor, the humor disguises the venom,
  • say it’s just play till the pen leaves permanent incision,
  • smilin while leavin a mark on your mind when I’m finishin,
  • give me line I diminish it,
  • listen real close and you'll know I dont give a shit,
  • hell's real nice and satans real kind but heaven is where it is
  • you can hear in the dark but the word of god is always imperative
  • and even if you are void of my narrative
  • All of my issues are scaring me
  • They are mentally impairing me
  • I sit in the fetal and pray to the lord that he is hearing me
  • I dont like drama
  • Attention’s too painful to bear for me
  • Even when nobody is ever there for me
  • I’d never know defeat
  • Rappers cant help but to notice me
  • Just remember they lied when they said they have overseen
  • Remember who tried when they had no-one noticing
  • You cannot rap so just shut up and go to sleep..

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Use AI? You’ll end up on dateline confessin’ “it ain’t mine!” fore’ I run you off the state line
  • Swat team breakin’ in cause you hate rhymes, call it a hate crime. Sting operation the way I “swat” you in the nighttime
  • You may find your rights restricted, you’ll be issued way more than a fake fine
  • Trafficin’ bars like you dealin’ with road signs. Only difference is, you’re the one with no drive!
  • Bro’s 5 learnin’ the basic building blocks of lyricism, it beats him out of “shape”
  • So he turns to his humanoid assistant to ease the pain. “Say, who’s to say you can’t just write this for me? It saves a ghostwriter from getting paid!”
  • Y’all are pests, where’s the Raid? I need to purge you termites from my structure
  • Schemes bone-dry, not even rubber. One punch from a veteran opponent, your spine’s gettin’ ruptured
  • I was taught better by my mother. Work the hardest at what you do, you’ll reap the benefits
  • You reap what you sow, but it’s inflicted by pestilence. War-torn land, you ain’t rockin’ with sediment
  • Cross my ground, become my nemesis. I only strike if I have to, I’m a mercy killer
  • Return you to dust like you caught in the filter, the air you’re breathin’s making you iller
  • You watered down, a flow distiller. My mind’s a sponge absorbin’ water from the Palm Springs
  • Drawstring, I tighten my grip on your reign (rain) till’ you lose oxygen to your brain
  • If you cross me, you do it in vain. I’ll raise the flames from below and light it up like butane
  • Flacco in the backfield, it’s a huge gain. Homies ravin’ in stadiums whenever they announce my name

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