Battles  freeyc_youngche vs BLACKEYES

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • Love is spiritual, complex not just physical
  • When you left it was death, my world veiw was cynical
  • Hurtin too was miserable, ta think of yous habitual
  • Critical condition, listen thats literal
  • Ta think of yous medicinal, writing letters ta mail
  • My passion has me trapped in, as in federal jail
  • The letters never sent, guess my sentiments failed
  • Yes i'm sensin betrayal, because we seperated
  • Never made it i'm amazed still, because she's educated
  • More than me importantly, shes dedicated
  • Now my hearts decimated, to thee extremity
  • Yes im sick in the head, and theres no remedy
  • Shes a heavenly entity, thats all honesty
  • Most men treat girl frinds, like a commodity
  • Sayin lies from male pride, and hypocrisy
  • Our love is deep as this abyss, or philosophy

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • blackeyes on this shit, yuh
  • wondering shit, questioning shit looking at your texts hoping its legit
  • im being desperate waking up sending you pictures of my breakfast
  • praying you respond reading every scripture so god can get me outta this one
  • fuck this shit can somebody listen im making all the wrong decisions
  • questioning my existence millions of reasons fuck-

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