Battles freeyc_youngche vs BLACKEYES
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- Love is spiritual, complex not just physical
- When you left it was death, my world veiw was cynical
- Hurtin too was miserable, ta think of yous habitual
- Critical condition, listen thats literal
- Ta think of yous medicinal, writing letters ta mail
- My passion has me trapped in, as in federal jail
- The letters never sent, guess my sentiments failed
- Yes i'm sensin betrayal, because we seperated
- Never made it i'm amazed still, because she's educated
- More than me importantly, shes dedicated
- Now my hearts decimated, to thee extremity
- Yes im sick in the head, and theres no remedy
- Shes a heavenly entity, thats all honesty
- Most men treat girl frinds, like a commodity
- Sayin lies from male pride, and hypocrisy
- Our love is deep as this abyss, or philosophy
DEFENDER'S RAP
- blackeyes on this shit, yuh
- wondering shit, questioning shit looking at your texts hoping its legit
- im being desperate waking up sending you pictures of my breakfast
- praying you respond reading every scripture so god can get me outta this one
- fuck this shit can somebody listen im making all the wrong decisions
- questioning my existence millions of reasons fuck-