Battles LuhAnna vs So-Wicked
RULES
Write a poem about love failing
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- I remember the times we had,
- It feels like so long ago.
- I remember the joy we shared,
- And the love you've shown.
- I remember the feeling, it felt so rare,
- To share the touch of someone
- Who cares.
- I remember our happiness, so endless and vast,
- In what we both thought would really last.
- The dark times went fast,
- because we had each others hand.
- But as a new day shows up,
- before we knew it.
- We're all grown up.
- Now I'm just a face in the crowd,
- Lost in the dark,
- Plain like a cloud.
- I lost my sight, I see but I dont.
- I think I'm blind.
- Elbows glued to my knee.
- I think back to then, "was I really trying?"
- As I look at you now, you seem to be fine.
- You said you loved me, are you caught up in lies?
- The pain in my chest, makes me want to run and hide.
- I think about you still, don't you think I dont.
- It was never meant to be,
- But I still feel enthroned.
- As I look around, the beauty of the world,
- But I'm trapped in darkness,
- I'm drowning in tar.
- Your always so close, but you feel so far.
- Am I being forced to fight this war?
- Is there a reason?
- To give and to take?
- To give one love, but then capture it above?
- Is it supposed to help me?
- To break my heart?
- I'm young and confused,
- The pain feels so sharp.
- I know it's life, but what's the point?
- Keep working my mind,
- Until I reach my breakpoint.
- So as I ask, what's the reason?
- Your breaking me, what is this treason?
- I need an answer, Oh, please just one!
- I'm simply stunned.
- You weren't the one.
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Startin’ @ 20 seconds
- (Verse 1)
- Been told that the iron in blood tastes like copper,
- Many mass murders of people, as much as latest concerts,
- Gamble you're life and put everything on the table offer,
- Why am I so twisted, I guess you can blame my father,
- Dealing with brain damage, trapped in a straight jacket,
- Get slayed with hatchets, puking in a waste basket,
- These coordinates in my mind aren't on the same axis,
- No longer normal, realizing I'm having changed habits,
- My hair is falling out in clumps and I feel the blood shot eyes,
- Vision is turning purple, seeing the rays of the sun got light,
- Down here we're living incredibly horrible, such hard lives,
- My head turns and buzzes, I see stars like I'm drunk off wine,
- Running these things literally, with the chainsaw,
- I ripped the blade off, I'm marking my place 'til I stay top,
- When I get the chance of killing I dive in like Trey Songz,
- There's blood dripping from the walls, more than rain drops.
- (Verse 2)
- Killing these verses and torturing doctors and nurses,
- A nutcase, head spins like blades of a helicopter turning,
- I'm a mental kid who'll make you pay the cost and earnings,
- You will be an accident, like your birth, condom's not working,
- Impaling you hard in the torso with piercing double spikes,
- Tryna run and hide but I'll find you as you struggle to climb,
- Leave you to suffocate in the quick sand as the mud will dry,
- The one survive, dumb and blind, rip open your stomach tight,
- Tie you up with duct tape, and my tough brain is just blazed,
- Stabbing with enough blades I'm crushing you with much weight,
- Some way in blood state I frustrate to get things the fuck straight,
- Cussing in rage so much my tongue's flamed, I'm officially a nut case,
- An animal chewing bars off, in my teeth looking like braces,
- Just leave me behind cages before your life changes,
- I'll read you out of history, make sure you die nameless,
- Find the right payments to make sure you're fried like bacon.
- (Verse 3)
- I'm locked up in this lock up like Jason X with his clock up,
- was mocked on, so cocked up my gun and with slaughter mod up,
- I was caught up by some cops, and was docked out,
- Here, to an asylum, a 1000 miles off an island, knocked out,
- 'Fore I dropped out, my hometown, people were tyrant, I was cropped out,
- was poked down, to ghost town, was living and brought up like a chopped clown,
- I got blood all over the room and vroom I go running over the docs,
- I own this fucking place with vip, blood floods all over the tomb,
- it blooms and fumes real cool, we're older than 662,
- 4 years, 664 flash floods of thrashed buds over the tomb,
- Phew, no baby after I drilled through their womb and lowered the doom,
- Joyful, gotta bloody cleaver for your heart and shredder for your brain,
- Shred your brain and leave the fucking stains over the place,
- We gotta chainsaw, you can bite the blades off with your hands on,
- With the fans on, your fans want your head off, you can't fend dawn,
- Now chop your scrotum and balls off and keep 'em in your museum for show,
- like the Colosseum on roll but it'll burn like magnesium for sure.