Battles  LuhAnna vs So-Wicked

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • I remember the times we had,
  • It feels like so long ago.
  • I remember the joy we shared,
  • And the love you've shown.
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  • I remember the feeling, it felt so rare,
  • To share the touch of someone
  • Who cares.
  • I remember our happiness, so endless and vast,
  • In what we both thought would really last.
  • The dark times went fast,
  • because we had each others hand.
  • But as a new day shows up,
  • before we knew it.
  • We're all grown up.
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  • Now I'm just a face in the crowd,
  • Lost in the dark,
  • Plain like a cloud.
  • I lost my sight, I see but I dont.
  • I think I'm blind.
  • Elbows glued to my knee.
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  • I think back to then, "was I really trying?"
  • As I look at you now, you seem to be fine.
  • You said you loved me, are you caught up in lies?
  • The pain in my chest, makes me want to run and hide.
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  • I think about you still, don't you think I dont.
  • It was never meant to be,
  • But I still feel enthroned.
  • As I look around, the beauty of the world,
  • But I'm trapped in darkness,
  • I'm drowning in tar.
  • Your always so close, but you feel so far.
  • Am I being forced to fight this war?
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  • Is there a reason?
  • To give and to take?
  • To give one love, but then capture it above?
  • Is it supposed to help me?
  • To break my heart?
  • I'm young and confused,
  • The pain feels so sharp.
  • I know it's life, but what's the point?
  • Keep working my mind,
  • Until I reach my breakpoint.
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  • So as I ask, what's the reason?
  • Your breaking me, what is this treason?
  • I need an answer, Oh, please just one!
  • I'm simply stunned.
  • You weren't the one.

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • (Verse 1)
  • Been told that the iron in blood tastes like copper,
  • Many mass murders of people, as much as latest concerts,
  • Gamble you're life and put everything on the table offer,
  • Why am I so twisted, I guess you can blame my father,
  • Dealing with brain damage, trapped in a straight jacket,
  • Get slayed with hatchets, puking in a waste basket,
  • These coordinates in my mind aren't on the same axis,
  • No longer normal, realizing I'm having changed habits,
  • My hair is falling out in clumps and I feel the blood shot eyes,
  • Vision is turning purple, seeing the rays of the sun got light,
  • Down here we're living incredibly horrible, such hard lives,
  • My head turns and buzzes, I see stars like I'm drunk off wine,
  • Running these things literally, with the chainsaw,
  • I ripped the blade off, I'm marking my place 'til I stay top,
  • When I get the chance of killing I dive in like Trey Songz,
  • There's blood dripping from the walls, more than rain drops.
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  • (Verse 2)
  • Killing these verses and torturing doctors and nurses,
  • A nutcase, head spins like blades of a helicopter turning,
  • I'm a mental kid who'll make you pay the cost and earnings,
  • You will be an accident, like your birth, condom's not working,
  • Impaling you hard in the torso with piercing double spikes,
  • Tryna run and hide but I'll find you as you struggle to climb,
  • Leave you to suffocate in the quick sand as the mud will dry,
  • The one survive, dumb and blind, rip open your stomach tight,
  • Tie you up with duct tape, and my tough brain is just blazed,
  • Stabbing with enough blades I'm crushing you with much weight,
  • Some way in blood state I frustrate to get things the fuck straight,
  • Cussing in rage so much my tongue's flamed, I'm officially a nut case,
  • An animal chewing bars off, in my teeth looking like braces,
  • Just leave me behind cages before your life changes,
  • I'll read you out of history, make sure you die nameless,
  • Find the right payments to make sure you're fried like bacon.
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  • (Verse 3)
  • I'm locked up in this lock up like Jason X with his clock up,
  • was mocked on, so cocked up my gun and with slaughter mod up,
  • I was caught up by some cops, and was docked out,
  • Here, to an asylum, a 1000 miles off an island, knocked out,
  • 'Fore I dropped out, my hometown, people were tyrant, I was cropped out,
  • was poked down, to ghost town, was living and brought up like a chopped clown,
  • I got blood all over the room and vroom I go running over the docs,
  • I own this fucking place with vip, blood floods all over the tomb,
  • it blooms and fumes real cool, we're older than 662,
  • 4 years, 664 flash floods of thrashed buds over the tomb,
  • Phew, no baby after I drilled through their womb and lowered the doom,
  • Joyful, gotta bloody cleaver for your heart and shredder for your brain,
  • Shred your brain and leave the fucking stains over the place,
  • We gotta chainsaw, you can bite the blades off with your hands on,
  • With the fans on, your fans want your head off, you can't fend dawn,
  • Now chop your scrotum and balls off and keep 'em in your museum for show,
  • like the Colosseum on roll but it'll burn like magnesium for sure.

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