Battles  Aesthix vs Melancholy

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Sad, passionate rap. I wrote this after a best friends suicide. PS cubic zirconia is a fake diamond

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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  • If it cracks it ain't a diamond
  • It's unpolished, don't know where to find it
  • Since you left, I don't know how to find it
  • Yeah, I feel my mind slip, don't know when I lost it
  • In an ugly world where light isn't shinin'
  • It can be blindin', yeah, I wish you were just hiding
  • Stay up late just to hear you callin'
  • Know it'll never come by the smile on your coffin
  • Sing me a sonnet because I never learned how to be honest
  • Yeah, Just like ballet, you danced like you weren't chained too
  • The words they say to you
  • Yet you prayed for nobody to blame you
  • Yet there weren't any angels to pray to
  • Yeah, Cubic Zirconia, nobody can save you
  • Cubic Zirconia
  • Music and Paranoia, stupid enough to destroy a
  • Dumb, feel catatonic
  • Lacked the octaves to ever hit the high notes
  • As the night closed, the road vanished to the ice cold
  • And just like smoke, another life gone to be a white ghost
  • Imperfect Zirconia, you slit your own throat
  • And I wasn't strong enough to hold up your world
  • I wasn't there enough for your words to be heard
  • Should've called first
  • Nobody saw your fall, nobody saw
  • Nobody knows what goes inside
  • Nobody was there when your world crashed and fell apart
  • But I'm here to hold your heart, I'm here to tell you that everything will be alright
  • Oh beautiful girl I know it's hard
  • I know it's hard
  • But just hold on
  • Everything is now alright
  • But it's too late now,
  • You're gone, I'm lost
  • Everything feels so empty
  • November, when the snow fell
  • Remember how you came out of nowhere?
  • I thought you were just another angel at our first stare
  • September was the first breath of fresh air
  • Light brown hair, a set of green eyes are much more rare
  • Another set to be scared
  • Samantha, I never really did cared
  • I'm sorry that it took me this long to say I was just scared
  • I'm sorry for all the words that I said that would hurt you
  • I'm sorry for the times where I knew I would burn you
  • I'm sorry for wanting things I could never admit to
  • I'm sorry for never loving you
  • I'm sorry for never giving you the chance for me to be something to commit to
  • It appears I'm running out of ways of saying that I miss you
  • Now it's something I have to live through
  • The sky's still blue, the night still looms, and the world still moves
  • Sing me a sonnet because I never learned how to be honest
  • Yeah, Just like ballet, you danced like you weren't chained too
  • The words they say to you
  • Yet you prayed for nobody to blame you
  • Yet there weren't any angels to pray to
  • Yeah, Cubic Zirconia, nobody can save you
  • Yet you prayed for nobody to blame you
  • Yet there weren't any angels to pray to
  • Yeah, Cubic Zirconia, nobody can save you
  • Yet you prayed for nobody to blame you
  • Yet there weren't any angels to pray to
  • Yeah, Cubic Zirconia, nobody can save you

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • i’m not just rhyming for rhyming’s sake
  • i’m tryin' to shape the lines that my mind creates
  • i'm tryin' to break what binds and snakes
  • i’m dyin' to wake from the silent ache
  • these arent just patterns they’re maps of a maze
  • they’re chains of a past i collapse with a phrase
  • they’re flames of a crash in a passionate blaze
  • they’re the frame of a mask that i wrap with a page
  • so dont mistake this flood for flair
  • its blood and air its love and fear
  • its all the years i tucked in layers
  • now they rush like drums in prayer
  • ive been stitched from shards of a shattered scene
  • had to script this art from the gasoline
  • now i grip these bars like a phantom scream
  • and spit each scar in a phantom stream

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