Battles  wasp vs Revan

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wasp won this battle!

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Battle on June 30 2025

CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • watch the crack in the sidewalk spread like veins under pressure
  • my pen tap dance, stress fracture, measure for measure
  • not a prophet, just a product of the corner store lectures
  • where loose lips sink ships but im submarine quiet, catch the treasure?
  • pressure cooker dreams whistle, steam vents in the verses
  • every noun got a shadow twin, meaning inverted
  • sun bleach the truth on brick faces, seen it fade like old denim
  • my verbs hit like switchblades flipped, clean, then serrated, then venom
  • this aint rhyme for the sake, its the code the concrete whispered
  • when the streetlights flicker morse, lost souls delivered or disappeared
  • from bricks to syllables, I build shelters, watch the weak gather
  • while vultures circle metaphors, circling, but never capture the real matter
  • fingerprint smudged on the pen like a burglars confession
  • flow erratic, static cling, combat the obsession with perfection
  • pocket full of sunken ships, junk metaphors I dunked and sunk quick
  • dusty lungs cough concrete, trust none, that punch stung, huh?
  • subtract the flash, add the ash from burnt bridges I traversed
  • knuckle scars map the hustle, muscle memory rehearsed...
  • sweat rings on collars tell tales the tongue cant utter
  • grit got no expiration date, it just clumps or butters your bread
  • watch the eyes when the beat drops, shutters flick like old projectors
  • projectin' futures brighter than the flicker in the rectors spectra
  • I aint king, just a splinter in the thumb of the game, deep embedded
  • write my name in the wet cement before it sets, it gets readed
  • then forgotten like yesterdays headline. or last winters frost
  • but the cracks reman. the cracks remain. at all cost

DEFENDER'S RAP

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  • I don't write bars — I exhume echoes from cellar tones,
  • Where kids learn math from dice rolls, and pain speaks in undertones.
  • Each letter bleeds rust — this ain't pen, it’s crowbar truth,
  • Etched in alley sermons, spit by crooked youth.
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  • My lines ain't clever, they tilt clocks off center,
  • Time melts like Dali sketches in winter.
  • No tuxedos for trauma — just raw gumline glass,
  • Truth wrapped in foil, sold in plastic bags.
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  • I break the meter like cuffs on a restless wrist,
  • Syntax twist like a deathbed wish.
  • No prophecies here — just splinters and park bench sins,
  • Where the silence shouts louder than the choir within.
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  • My pen limps — it’s been through glass and ash,
  • You read in Morse code? I breathe in Braille flash.
  • Each stanza’s a tombstone etched in breath,
  • Every verse, a brush with death.
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  • I build proof, not shelters, with rusted wire verbs,
  • No switchblades — just gravel words.
  • Fingerprint's a smear, signed in loss,
  • A hymn for the cracked, the burned, the lost.
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  • I ain't king — I’m the echo when the king drops cold,
  • The cough in court when the silence unfolds.
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  • Write your name in cement — hope rain forgets.
  • I write mine in ash — it spreads, infects.
  • Not the headline — I’m the silence after the shot,
  • The stain on the page that the story forgot.

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