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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- These days I’ve been living my life La Vida Loca that’s why I’m low
- I’ve been making money rain on my bank account and my card seemed to flow
- We are the bad guys you already know
- Pop smoke knew the drill American nigga you know the will
- Me and my baby fixing stitches after that small fight with bitches
- So I guess you want me to me pleasant like Marry Poppins
- No severing limbs and chopping off body parts dropping
- Them off of a fairy crossing the Hudson
- I bet its no cursing because you aint a thugs son
- But one of a Pastor churching you on manners
- well I'm still going bananners like Bananas in Pajamas
- You got no Jam plus cant jam us up on those phoney rhymes you hand us
- Understand us? No, neither no I drinking co-co in cabanas
- While I got a Carrabin coconut to stroke my, WHAT in Havana
- Am I doing wasting rhymes spewing these weak mutinies
- Mutants who refusing to go mute so you can swallow my puke
- A nuke is what I feel like right now, but unable to cut lose
- So whats the use of having to chose weather you abuse
- The rules and cuss your brains out in this insane bout
- But I know you aint ever got brains from a dame another mans pain his spouse
- Right in his own house, (squeak squeak), what was that? oh, Mickey Mouse
- These days I’ve been living my life La Vida Loca that’s why I’m low
- I’ve been making money rain on my bank account and my card seemed to flow
- Cheese cake, Pan cake became my menu ever since after that show
- My coloured girl got me shaking
- But I know that gonna go (x2)
- The nigga been actin' suspicious
- We caught him shaking like a choker
- Nuh bru I'm so crazy like the Joker
- Been dark and scary like a bunker
- been moving side by side like a drunker
- These days I’ve been living my life La Vida Loca that’s why I’m low
- I’ve been making money rain on my bank account and my card seemed to flow
- Cheese cake, Pan cake became my menu ever since after that show
- My coloured girl got me shaking
- But I know that gonna go (x2)
DEFENDER'S RAP
- you keep speaking up on chicken but your words they speak they sickening
- i'm looking at my body, my heart is steady trickling
- my head full of thoughts, my mind is easily conflicted
- drugs all my by self sit in my room, full of addction
- i'm steady inside of my head, you could really claim I'm tripping
- not a drug doer but from the tip you'll catch me sippin
- what's the point of a million if you can't even find your one?
- the question I ask before I reload the barrel of this gun
- I smile when I say this I really do this rap shit for fun,
- i'm trying to get my name out right under the sun
- I went out the to park to clear my head
- life ain't all about money, I keep on running the bread
- don't wanna be the legacy of a man blown by lead
- so if you listen, don't consider this a cry for help
- because there's some niggas that got feelings but push them out to the shelf
- i