Battles luketheundead vs Young_Devon
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
This rap was deleted.DEFENDER'S RAP
- Verse 1
- I studied the greats, now I write in italics,
- My mind’s a blade — every bar brings balance.
- Syllables sync like gears in a clock,
- Pen game strong, got ink in the stock.
- Flow too fluid, it’s a thesis in motion,
- Metaphors layered like tectonic oceans.
- Grammar in flames when I enter the booth,
- Came with the facts, now they duckin’ the truth.
- Wordplay rich, no filler, no fluff,
- Every line built tough like it studied too much.
- Hook
- This that A+ sound, check the rubric,
- Paragraph heat, ain't nothing too stupid.
- Structure tight, every stanza intact,
- No cap, I write essays that rap.
- This that pen game honors, no gimmick,
- Lyrics got weight, and the rhythm stay in it.
- From the first draft, I attack with poise,
- My bars get grades — yours just make noise.
- Verse 2
- Similes spark like flint to the gas,
- Double entendres from honors class.
- Eyes on the page while I master the craft,
- Each hook a footnote, each verse a graph.
- “Flow like water” — nah, mine’s like wine,
- Got better with age and deeper with time.
- I don’t just rhyme, I analyze themes,
- Like dreams deferred and crumbling schemes.
- A scholar with swagger, essays in beats,
- Put the game in a binder and gave it receipts.
- Hook – Repeat
- This that A+ sound, check the rubric,
- Paragraph heat, ain't nothing too stupid.
- Structure tight, every stanza intact,
- No cap, I write essays that rap.
- This that pen game honors, no gimmick,
- Lyrics got weight, and the rhythm stay in it.
- From the first draft, I attack with poise,
- My bars get grades — yours just make noise.
- Outro
- GPA bars, I don’t skip class,
- Even my silence got lyrical mass.
- I rap like I’m graded by a Harvard prof,
- So when I drop heat, it’s with the cap and the cloth.