Battles  luketheundead vs Young_Devon

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

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DEFENDER'S RAP

  • Verse 1
  • I studied the greats, now I write in italics,
  • My mind’s a blade — every bar brings balance.
  • Syllables sync like gears in a clock,
  • Pen game strong, got ink in the stock.
  • Flow too fluid, it’s a thesis in motion,
  • Metaphors layered like tectonic oceans.
  • Grammar in flames when I enter the booth,
  • Came with the facts, now they duckin’ the truth.
  • Wordplay rich, no filler, no fluff,
  • Every line built tough like it studied too much.
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  • Hook
  • This that A+ sound, check the rubric,
  • Paragraph heat, ain't nothing too stupid.
  • Structure tight, every stanza intact,
  • No cap, I write essays that rap.
  • This that pen game honors, no gimmick,
  • Lyrics got weight, and the rhythm stay in it.
  • From the first draft, I attack with poise,
  • My bars get grades — yours just make noise.
  •  
  • Verse 2
  • Similes spark like flint to the gas,
  • Double entendres from honors class.
  • Eyes on the page while I master the craft,
  • Each hook a footnote, each verse a graph.
  • “Flow like water” — nah, mine’s like wine,
  • Got better with age and deeper with time.
  • I don’t just rhyme, I analyze themes,
  • Like dreams deferred and crumbling schemes.
  • A scholar with swagger, essays in beats,
  • Put the game in a binder and gave it receipts.
  •  
  • Hook – Repeat
  • This that A+ sound, check the rubric,
  • Paragraph heat, ain't nothing too stupid.
  • Structure tight, every stanza intact,
  • No cap, I write essays that rap.
  • This that pen game honors, no gimmick,
  • Lyrics got weight, and the rhythm stay in it.
  • From the first draft, I attack with poise,
  • My bars get grades — yours just make noise.
  •  
  • Outro
  • GPA bars, I don’t skip class,
  • Even my silence got lyrical mass.
  • I rap like I’m graded by a Harvard prof,
  • So when I drop heat, it’s with the cap and the cloth.

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