Battles luketheundead vs Young_Devon
RULES
i <3 idk
Max of 64 lines
THIS BATTLE IS OVER
This battle ended in a tie.
START YOUR OWN BATTLE
Thousands of battles have taken place on RapPad. Why not join the fun?
CHALLENGER'S RAP
- i know i know
- i can never drive too fast
- i always drive too slow
- bumper to bumper, platinum bones gonna grow
- anger and suicide,
- the confusion of a time to laden with despair and regret
- it's known to cause violence
- it's know to cause hate
- it's known to cause war
- love at all cost
- pay the price to be the big boss
- take my limbs
- take my jaw
- take my eye
- undead soldier gonna annihilate some fools
- chip me up like a robot dog
- got my pet robot dog
- cyber security
- three years over thirty and six months axactky
- speakin' so oh so matter of factly
- deep tension and hardcore mentions
- even the worst of the world got a finger in my intentions
- wealth is some stupid ass motherfuckers invention
- i am the tru rich
- so educate yourself, heaux
- become better you are
- become better than the fuccin world ever was before
- we got a long story to tell
- a promise of life on a planet so rare
- who could be god's witness to the peace that will endure
- this is the timeframe of a long overdue mastermind
- to say that there are some things i know for certain
- i am smarter than the president
- and given what it takes to run a government
- i'm really just a kid with a gun who shoots bullets for fun...
- well
- that's a few words that will never be unread
- i'ma stay loyal and boom bap this death trap until my neck snap
- for a second time that is
- undead with the severed head
- ghost of santa
- cuz christmas in america is a hoax for all you republican jokes
- all i this prejudice i do bespoke
- shakespeare riding on a skateboard with shakespeare's writing for
- graphics, the cool
- i'ma fanatic, food & liquor i'm an addict
- so drastic to speak with computer words like elastic
- bitch ass motherfuccer should learn to practice
- nam-myoho-renge-kyo
- and like
- here's an ass picc
- or a dicc picc
- you picc
- don't really give a shit or a piss
- ugly business runnin' deadly weapons with no safety
- feds got me inna bind
- all this information in my mind
- write a few more words
- succ up the space
- take up the time
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Verse 1
- I studied the greats, now I write in italics,
- My mind’s a blade — every bar brings balance.
- Syllables sync like gears in a clock,
- Pen game strong, got ink in the stock.
- Flow too fluid, it’s a thesis in motion,
- Metaphors layered like tectonic oceans.
- Grammar in flames when I enter the booth,
- Came with the facts, now they duckin’ the truth.
- Wordplay rich, no filler, no fluff,
- Every line built tough like it studied too much.
- Hook
- This that A+ sound, check the rubric,
- Paragraph heat, ain't nothing too stupid.
- Structure tight, every stanza intact,
- No cap, I write essays that rap.
- This that pen game honors, no gimmick,
- Lyrics got weight, and the rhythm stay in it.
- From the first draft, I attack with poise,
- My bars get grades — yours just make noise.
- Verse 2
- Similes spark like flint to the gas,
- Double entendres from honors class.
- Eyes on the page while I master the craft,
- Each hook a footnote, each verse a graph.
- “Flow like water” — nah, mine’s like wine,
- Got better with age and deeper with time.
- I don’t just rhyme, I analyze themes,
- Like dreams deferred and crumbling schemes.
- A scholar with swagger, essays in beats,
- Put the game in a binder and gave it receipts.
- Hook – Repeat
- This that A+ sound, check the rubric,
- Paragraph heat, ain't nothing too stupid.
- Structure tight, every stanza intact,
- No cap, I write essays that rap.
- This that pen game honors, no gimmick,
- Lyrics got weight, and the rhythm stay in it.
- From the first draft, I attack with poise,
- My bars get grades — yours just make noise.
- Outro
- GPA bars, I don’t skip class,
- Even my silence got lyrical mass.
- I rap like I’m graded by a Harvard prof,
- So when I drop heat, it’s with the cap and the cloth.