Battles Da_negatior vs Young_Devon
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
- //Intro
- Alright I haven’t dropped in a minute
- Lemme start with some response lyrics
- //Verse 1
- Critics go on extra digits, evolved my self
- But millions of you are really dissolved (ouch)
- Now don’t be silly, visions you really couldn’t be solved
- Armed aren’t ya? Okay than I’m going to have to, visit the next
- Sparked you had to write your responses, chuckle and choke
- But I’m goin’ to have to tight a conversation, wait a minute I meant
- I’m goin’ have to type a conversation, cause I tighten my noose around your throat
- Convert all the constant pressure to your lungs, note that you ain’t gettin’ loose
- Control all the consistent signals you press, tongues gettin’ controlled like remotes
- Promote that you inconsistent, unfortunately your undisplayable, undisciplined, fully cold,
- Yes I gotta remove all the incoherent chatter, nothing but disappointment and disrespecting,
- Your ancestors, pass down the torch, therapeutic appointments repeating your undivided attentions
- Full of cholesterol dead beat overload, point you to the nearest psychotherapeutic, divide ten
- Of these intentions they pull over those, pick you to brawl, drawl my psychotic gun at gun point,
- Internet beef is all y’all want, that’s why your opinions didn’t matter anyway, ten guns drawled
- And your drawing to conclusions, that this hater beef shit is just contusions, all this confusion
- Makes me wanna put his raps into concussions, cuss with AI words, yellow tape goin’ get folded
- Call this bitch the best, but he graphs his raps off dis-inclusion, non-excluded,
- More like he's non-inclusive, test my patience and you get fired with 100 executed sentences
- Exclude his interludes, nothing couldn’t be more wrong about your raps about you dissin’ 30
- Different men, meanwhile you add 31 more members to the list of dissin’, dirty and chirpy
- All y’all hold on to my shit like it’s beef jerky, jerk me to the next wordy dissection to fend
- For you to say 50 more wordy shit to avoid beef, combine Casinofreak to the equation,
- Y’all just hatching more immature shit, all of y’all acting like him, I see no freak in my ratio
- Unrational, I meant irrational, since I use so many nonsensical words, revolutionizing my flows
- Yes I’m snappin’ on this track, and you know why I’m so irritated, take my sense of words,
- More words to make it into 32 bar sentences, break it down and you mysteriously
- Find your self in jail with a 32 year sentence, fully suspicious in your mystical land of yours
- This is 34 bars now, the more I raise the bar, the more you get added in your magical cell of yours
- Grab my cellular device and plant a bomb on your graceful ass island, more tactical flows,
- Technically undefinable, define my poisonous plant into wishful indescribable tasks, glowin’
- And blowin’ your name to fifty pieces, send five testable thoughts with Techs strapped,
- Textured and fully sent to give you fifty cents mind of indestructible ideas fully trapped
- Holy fuckin’ moly, you gotta be desperate for deserted website to be looking’ for hatred beef,
- Hate these syllables comin’ flyin’ out my mouth, everyone is not sympathetic, not matured at all
- Your just happy this website full of immature little kids, who get pathetic when they get picked,
- To do the time, just sadden as they get picked on, and they come here, theoretic theories as they
- Get picked online, so they decide to ride with X factor online, so sorry for your theories
- To be lies, pick my lines apart, but you don’t read them anyways, you skip to the ratings,
- Drop a three in my rhymes, how many more, times, do I have to snap, in my, timestamps
- Of these time we share, so I gotta go to Times Square, to tap into unpotential links,
- To unlink these X factor chains, made it unbearable to find my swagger in anyways
- So now I find my swag drip, and let my uzi rip, and you zip up like a therapy icon bodybag
- No bodyguard goin’ to save you in anyways, I had to change up, to, three, different, flows
- For, you to see, why, I’ve been on this shit for a while, so how about you, stay awhile, and
- Follow, me, notice, all these bars were committed schemes, floodin’ water flow,
- Mixed with a chop, n’ screwed flow, to miss your ears that you say you listen,
- But my mittens are gloves, and they ain’t boxin’ gloves, it’s surgical gloves,
- To insert, my power surge, so I gotta box you in and watch you play loveless
- Cause I’m gonna drop your power less n less to give all you boxed lessons
DEFENDER'S RAP
- Hands too good, I guess you should've gotten Allstate
- Oops, y'all gotta make it quicker like you're State Farm
- Too far? I don't know who you are Shoot, I'm a Kahoot star (who?) ain't no hoopla to it
- Second guessin'? Y'all buenos noches, I can't be snoozin'
- Got the codes to the game, made my name make a bang
- Red and blue sus like "Among Us", I can't be choosin'
- I'm a quick card clickin' buzzer-beater with the top spot
- Green I see, if you ain't me, you just a knockoff
- Grades got COVID but in-game, I'm Jimmy Neutron
- Player of the year, Top of the game, I'm a Kahoot star (who?) ain't no hoopla to it
- Second guessin'? I'll play y'all like chess, imagine losin'
- Got the codes to the game, in my zone like I'm Aang
- Red and blue sus like "Among Us", I can't be choosin'
- I'm a quick card clickin' buzzer-beater with the top spot
- Ain't makin' green? Ain't me, you just a knockoff
- Grades malnourished, but we eatin' now like Rick Ross
- Player of the year, just like an ex, I never miss, nah-nah