Battles  TWTWB vs JuicyJobaJaba

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CHALLENGER'S RAP

  • My vision's getting too blurry, spitting each and every soliloquy
  • To forget every memory, tryna make my rhymes better than me
  • I'm tryna greet ya, but you're past the shoreline, since I've meet you, it has been a long time
  • Many little cunts stepped in my way, tryna stop me from hurdling to the end of the day
  • Tryna finish what I started, I'm sure ya understand me, you're the only person who gets the shit that I feel
  • My head's dropped down, blood drippin' from my mouth, I'm weak and dying, but still playin' cat and mouse
  • Of course, I paid my debt, course is changed, still bereft what to do, I'm stressed, opinion's not correct
  • I'm indirect, I'm still lying to your face, thy kingdom come, that's an amen, grace
  • Fine, I'll look through the looking glass, looking for the thing I lost a long time ago
  • I must find it and keep it before I crash, then I die, I miss the feeling, I have to go
  • Fine, I'll look through the looking glass, but I won't find the thing I lost a long time ago
  • I miss you, and I want to be there, but I die, I miss the feeling, and I have to go
  • Reality's a mirror, Twisted, as we deliver, What the Devil asks us one by one, Hiding between civils like a medium
  • I talk to my cousin but he has a gun, He'll be the one who'll cause my death
  • It could be anyone, you, me, a guy who smokes meth
  • The Grim Reaper hides in a million facades, Who knows what it'll wear when your head will hit the rocks?
  • Who knows what it'll wear when your head will hit the rocks? And it's sure it'll hit the rocks
  • And then you will hear two little knocks, I see a scythe that'll knock off you socks
  • You're trapped inside a tightly locked box
  • We all know you'll die in a fire
  • Before descending soar even higher
  • Than the strongest bird and a plane combined
  • You can trick your eyes, but not your mind
  • Fine, I'll look through the looking glass
  • Looking for the thing I lost a long time ago
  • I must find it and keep it before I crash
  • Then I die, I miss the feeling, I have to go
  • Fine, I'll look through the looking glass
  • But I won't find the thing I lost a long time ago
  • I miss you, and I want to be there
  • But I die, I miss the feeling, and I have to go

DEFENDER'S RAP

  • You noticed I was susceptible, you picked me like a vegetable
  • And now I’m surprised by your absence when we at one time were inseparable
  • “It’s my fault for sure (shore)”, you swept me from the bay
  • Into a hazardous thunderstorm I shoulda seen from miles away
  • What else can I say? You took the wind out my sails, no lifeguard on duty
  • Lord tell me how I fell captive to this majestic beauty?
  • Soundin’ love “sirens” at me, now I’m a mariner in the sea
  • I thought you was a mermaid, now I’m chokin’ and can’t breathe
  • Friends believed I was gullible, so they left me for dead, mutiny
  • It was tough to find nourishment when the island I was left on provided fruitlessly
  • Lunacy moved ruefully through me, for the next 5 months I saw visions lucidly
  • Of you with a new guy havin’ the time of your life, it made me wanna write my love life’s eulogy
  • I failed to adapt, so I gathered lumber and built a raft
  • It took time to craft, but I drifted that wood out to sea and never looked back
  • To get to the treasure on the map, sometimes you gotta get attacked
  • Pillaged and ransacked of everything but the clothes on your back, your village burnt til’ the landscape’s charcoal black
  • She got me talkin’ like a pirate, cause she raided my chest
  • My heart was missing, so I reunited with me hearties and went on a quest
  • To the Atlantic coast to find the key in the west with minimal food and hammock rest
  • It was my only hope to unlock new possibilities and fill this unprecedented abscess
  • We ate, drank and were merry under pink skies
  • But when they didn’t subside, we knew by sunrise they were a warning sign
  • At half past 9 some tentacles arise, the ship was unaligned, so we were kraken the whip til’ that thing died
  • Runnin’ rampid blastin’ cannons to ensure we didn’t have to jump ship and swim for our lives
  • Daylight began to fade, Jolly Roger was unscathed
  • I thank Neptune every day that the crew and I survived this tirade
  • It was at this moment I no longer cared about finding the keys to love
  • Cause a loyal crew and a low tide provided the perfect opportunity for my brain waves to ease up

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