Battles luketheundead vs chkhaboom
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CHALLENGER'S RAP
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- bent like a consonant tense in a sonnet that vents through the net of a continent, fence with the obvious
- march to the ambient pulse of a planet with gambits, vanished atlantis descendants with plans in the sand that expand when examined with cameras
- my damage is managed with mantras i chant in abandoned pagodas, i'm past it
- past games like bergman in black rain, burst like a shaft through a cracked plane
- map planes where the facts change but the syntax stay like it's latched to the base of a soundscape built by the hands of the jazz greats
- navigated through layers of gravel like ancient mosaics in chapels of battlefields
- damaged appeal, i'm balanced in fields where mechanics conceal the real shape of a phrase, hand to the quill
- like i'm channelin gil, anthem with ambient stillness, killing like clips stitched in a reel by a filmist who vanished
- my targets embedded in margins of parchment where scholars debated with carbon and harshness
- i harness the heat when the beat breaks buried in lost crates under steep lakes
- my speech takes form like a dream state, i rephrase the freeway like a sequence in eames briefcase
- sleek shapes that deepfakes couldn't replace, pennin like i'm evidence in the residence of a reverence, reverent text like i'm mail from ellison
- relevance shaped like a relic from edison's hellbent experiments taped in the basement of negligent men with benevolent pens
- i step where the tempo bends, blend tone like old stone temples, patient with pacing, i base this on phrases that phase shift through layers of playback
- i'm stainless and stateless, trained in the pages of sages with names that were famous in ages
- where flame was the way they relayed what they made with a blade in their larynx
- i'm backlit, i'm trackin the axis of atlas in flash glyphs, pat this distraction of graphs and attachments
- mad tracks stacked like the backstack in grad class notebooks from mit mind maps, i dial back to wax and cassette stacks
- stem path parallel to the hem of a hymn that was sung in the din of a stemmed glass
- i bend facts, let 'em flow through a lens that remembers the bends in a past math
- my craft is caught in the lap of the lost gods, often i jot in the fog of a thought that was sparked, honest with modestness
- i don't broadcast, i watermark like i'm boxed in a loft at the top of a block with a lock watch for the shift in the plotlines like hitchcock timelines flickerin
- built from a million syllables, listen with diction with frictionless pivots in systems of where limits are given